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Somewhere to go Something to say Someone to see waiting...but why Sands of time…tears dry Sigh of desert wind Sweeps away face...but where Sedate desire draws daisies on water Splashes colors on canvas of air Searches poems on crumpled pages...but how April 23, 2019

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Date: 4/27/2019 7:47:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Subimal. Well penned.
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Date: 4/24/2019 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win Subimal! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/24/2019 11:15:00 AM
Why? Where ? or How ? Difficult to explain. BIG CONGRATS to win TOP.
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Date: 4/24/2019 5:51:00 AM
Wonderful and clever use of poetic writing devices makes this piece unique. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/24/2019 3:54:00 AM
This is a unique masterpiece from your pen, I liked it immensely. The feeling of getting lost, the whys hows and wheres... Depth in few simple words.... Trophy it deserved indeed. Congratulations... Keep writing more
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