There Are Days When

There are days when
there is only me, savoring
my few hours of barren solitude.

There are days when red ink
from my loves letters play crystal
clear memories of our perpetual love
oh how it hurts.

There are days when my own voice
scares me. These teardrops become
eternal waterfalls that cascade down my ebony skin

There are days when if given the choice
I would end these memories, and fly
among the morning clouds that echo
of brilliant blue.



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#4- There are days when 
8/21/2018
Sponsored by Viv Wigley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Evans Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Diggin' this! That last verse is killa'!
Wise Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Boy, that is a beautiful poem. Nice job Debbie :)
Ali Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 9:10 AM
lovely!A beautiful piece of literature.It makes me cry and it makes me laugh at the same time!
Bangalee Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 5:20 AM
beautiful poem penned
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 7:12 PM
This is so beautiful Debbie! Congratulations on having it featured. : )
Palli Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Can feel the pain, wish it wasn’t so. Good imagery!
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Many congrats on your win Debbie:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 12:26 PM
A little sad, but sometimes we are, and how we all want to fly sometimes. A lovely write, congrats on your placement and thanks for entering my contest. Viv x
Walker Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Wow, O my, Thank you.
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 6:43 PM
I love your mind; your stuff is real and natural. Sometimes I feel like the artists push and try to use overly complex word and overly scripted phrases. Your stuff gives me the feeling of a long chat over tea. Bravo!
Wegman Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 12:08 PM
LOVE THIS! Great job and best of luck in the contest, Deb. I think we all have 'days when...' After 59 years on the planet, I know I have them all the time. Peace!
Walker Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thank you Michael
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