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There Are Days When

There are days when there is only me, savoring my few hours of barren solitude. There are days when red ink from my loves letters play crystal clear memories of our perpetual love oh how it hurts. There are days when my own voice scares me. These teardrops become eternal waterfalls that cascade down my ebony skin There are days when if given the choice I would end these memories, and fly among the morning clouds that echo of brilliant blue. Pick a Theme Poem Contest #4- There are days when 8/21/2018 Sponsored by Viv Wigley

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Date: 7/4/2020 11:38:00 AM
Diggin' this! That last verse is killa'!
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Date: 3/1/2019 9:27:00 AM
Boy, that is a beautiful poem. Nice job Debbie :)
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Date: 3/1/2019 9:10:00 AM
lovely!A beautiful piece of literature.It makes me cry and it makes me laugh at the same time!
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Date: 2/25/2019 5:20:00 AM
beautiful poem penned
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Date: 2/24/2019 7:12:00 PM
This is so beautiful Debbie! Congratulations on having it featured. : )
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Date: 9/4/2018 1:06:00 PM
Can feel the pain, wish it wasn’t so. Good imagery!
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Date: 9/2/2018 6:20:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Debbie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2018 12:26:00 PM
A little sad, but sometimes we are, and how we all want to fly sometimes. A lovely write, congrats on your placement and thanks for entering my contest. Viv x
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Debbie Walker
Date: 9/2/2018 7:19:00 PM
Wow, O my, Thank you.
Date: 8/29/2018 6:43:00 PM
I love your mind; your stuff is real and natural. Sometimes I feel like the artists push and try to use overly complex word and overly scripted phrases. Your stuff gives me the feeling of a long chat over tea. Bravo!
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Date: 8/22/2018 12:08:00 PM
LOVE THIS! Great job and best of luck in the contest, Deb. I think we all have 'days when...' After 59 years on the planet, I know I have them all the time. Peace!
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Debbie Walker
Date: 8/23/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Michael

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