Lisa Ricci Poet Free verse

Then I'll Know

"then I'll know"
tell me not with simple words I love you
demonstrate in ways that define you do
bring me just one single rose
then I'll know
tell me not your love is true
express this to me by showing me
when we wake kiss me to greet the day
then I'll know
still
tell me not without a song in your heart
shower me with lasting glances
take me by the hand til we fly away
then I'll know

SkyWatcher  -  03-14-17

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Doug Vinson March 16, 2017 at 1:02 PM I'd just like to fly. Have had dreams about it - even if they are mostly hard concentration followed by a slight levitation. It's still a great feeling. Anybody would be lucky to meet you, Lisa. Lisa Ricci March 16, 2017 at 2:58 PM Good Afternoon Doug. Thank you ever so much for this wonderful and gracious review. And your commentary is very generous. I have the same dreams. And yes, I can feel and sense the levitation and flight. It is amazing and then I wake. Thank you for sharing that with me. Honestly. And oh my goodness. Thank you also for your last line and words. That is a huge compliment.

Darren White March 15, 2017 at 3:55 AM You will know Lisa, he will show it. The thought of flying away together is one of my own favourite dreams, it keeps me going. Dream and dream Lisa, until you know :) Lisa Ricci March 15, 2017 at 5:11 AM Good Morning Darren. Yes, I will. I'm the forever dreamer. Your review is beautiful Darren. Thank you so much. Honestly. Have a great morning and day.

White Wolf March 14, 2017 at 9:21 PM Simply beautiful, Lisa! I always know when I've read great poetry! Just so you know...Great penmanship! Lisa Ricci March 15, 2017 at 5:18 AM Hello White Wolf. Oh my goodness. I'm honored beyond words and measure. Thank you Thank you. This entry along with your commentary and feedback are so generous. Honestly. I never take either lightly. You have started my morning on a great note so thank you for that. Have a wonderful morning.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 14, 2017 at 4:45 PM You do write romance well Lisa! I love your earnest style :) xomo & 7 Lisa Ricci March 14, 2017 at 8:53 PM Oh Maureen. Thank you for your commentary to which is truly generous. I'm honored by your words. Honestly. Please know I enjoy your work and skill also. Have a wonderful night.

Charmaine Chircop March 14, 2017 at 4:19 PM Indeed our deeds should be deeper than our words when we love someone..So beautiful this is..For a moment I made these feelings my own...A fave. Lisa Ricci March 14, 2017 at 8:51 PM Oh Charmaine. Wow. Thank you ever so much. Honestly. And yes, deeds are deeper than words. Thank you for all your continued support visits and generosity. There are no words for my appreciation. Have a wonderful night.

Connie Pachecho March 14, 2017 at 2:54 PM that was great. how i wish it was true. that easy. Lisa Ricci March 14, 2017 at 8:47 PM Hello Connie. Thank you very much. I think it can be when the love is right. I appreciate your feedback. Enjoy the night.

Tim Smith March 14, 2017 at 2:13 PM Yes, show the love in all you do rather than all you say...lovely verse Lisa Lisa Ricci March 14, 2017 at 8:46 PM You bet Tim. Good Evening. Thank you once again. Honestly.

Frank Sheehan March 14, 2017 at 1:50 PM Nice poem. Enjoyed it immensely. Actions speak louder than words. Lisa Ricci March 14, 2017 at 8:45 PM Hello Frank. Thank you very much for your generous review. I enjoyed your intake as actions do speak louder than words. I hope you enjoyed the entry.