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Their Fluffy Clouds

There's a world of dazzling light up there So, when bulky night-clothes skies do wear It simply is not fair For they obstruct our every view ~ Their fluffy clouds we'd like to see through

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Date: 1/22/2023 7:44:00 PM
Me too. I own a children's book by the famous Eric Carle. I used it when I taught. It's titled, Little Cloud. You poem remimded me of it. I love your poems metaphors.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/24/2023 8:16:00 PM
Little cloud. White and Proud. Please don't thunder. It's too loud...
Date: 1/4/2023 8:49:00 PM
Those darn clouds the obstruct the view and sometimes bring in the storm and rain.
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Date: 1/3/2023 8:47:00 PM
Quite true. Much to be seen. So dispense with the bulky clothes. Strip the sky bare...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/5/2023 3:32:00 PM
Sweet comment, Valsa!
Date: 1/3/2023 8:42:00 PM
I'd like to order a pair of cloud-penetrating-laser goggles please! I don't need a bag. Cheers...ab
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/24/2023 8:16:00 PM
I have just what you need Anselmo. Hope they're the right color and size for you.

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