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Their First Caress

two love hearts beating intrepidness so abounds kissing to caress dishevelled clothes now adrift excitement in touch, delights http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-18.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/4/2011 11:30:00 PM
passionate and sweet James ..leaving lovers breathless and readers too luv.. very exciting write..
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:58:00 PM
Great tanka, James. Love the dishevelled clothes adrift line!!
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:18:00 PM
very passionate write, James
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Date: 8/4/2011 7:03:00 PM
Ahh, it leaves me breathless, James. How wonderful that you are writing such uplifting poetry now. So glad you are happy! Love, Carolyn (ps-check your regular email) Thanks!
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