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a flurry of snow natures ticker-tape parade... snowflake confetti Snow day students were tickled pink today playfully making snow angels all-day but nobody knew they laid in dog poo till that thin layer of snow got scraped away. And as their coats reeked, they sat at the back of the bus the next day. (haiku, limerick, Monoku) 01/24/2022 Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/16/2022 8:13:00 PM

Dear Emile, so sorry it took so long to comment on this fantastic/fun write. You brilliantly combined these forms to a T. My Belated Congrats on your win in my contest. Hope all is well, my friend. Blessings...Charlie

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2022 7:25:00 AM

Thanks, Charles, all is well with me my friend and I hope the same goes for you. I appreciate the win and your comments, Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2022 3:49:00 AM

I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2022 8:11:00 AM

Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/11/2022 5:09:00 AM

Great ending through monoku. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/11/2022 7:47:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2022 4:38:00 AM

Oh Emile, this is a winner for sure. I loved it. : ) Blessings xxoo

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/26/2022 8:50:00 AM

Thanks, Connie, just some fun with words, I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2022 11:28:00 AM

- ... when the snow melts ... dog poop shows up ... like the dandelion ... yes they smelled awful, Emile :))) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/24/2022 12:17:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/24/2022 11:16:00 AM

(chuckling) This is a clever one, Emile. Your imagination was running full tilt, but it was right on the mark! Best of luck in the contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/24/2022 12:16:00 PM

Thanks, Milt, I speak from experience, my friend, Emile.