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The World We Live In

In a world where pain, love, happiness, deception, and lies. Truly mean the same thing..When the world strikes you it feels as if there is honestly nothing to live for. n Nothing to die for.. jJust an empty, hurtful feeling.. that seeps like a toxin to the heart..It only starts as painfull numbing feeling. That slowly starts to feel like a knife going..deeper and deeper into the heart until you just cant take it and you just release every feeling, every thought, every emotion, you drop the fake smile and just release your true feelings.. and when its all said and done you feel as if your perfectly inocent world that you had known your whole life was just taken from you. You just feel so broken and empty...and even when the slightest glimmer of light shows.. You still feel trapt, and Surrounded by the sad truth ,but as the title of my poem says... thats just the world we live in...

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Date: 4/24/2024 12:36:00 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/9/2016 1:53:00 AM
Brett, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2011 10:07:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..hope your time on Soup will be filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 1/15/2011 10:06:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Brett. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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