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The World of Jack

In the world of Jack, things are strange indeed Some outrageous thoughts are waiting to be freed No control I have Just expel lotsa gas When attempting to be nice, fail totally, a bad seed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/19/2017 3:02:00 PM
Not so bad as to be lovable Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/19/2017 3:09:00 PM
SWEETNESS YOU SEND! Are you feeling better than a couple of days ago! HAPPY TRAILS MY LOVE!!! xxx
Date: 9/19/2017 9:32:00 AM
I doubt that we're in much danger//there are minds out there much stranger//than Santa Jack's//and lot of hacks//like the one writing this signed — the LONE RANGER. THINK ON JACKKKKKKKKKKK!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/19/2017 9:57:00 AM
Sure getting your lim pen a workout too! I could write 'em from now to doomsday but I'll never outlim JJ!!!

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