The Word To Say

(i)
Hello, I say with silence,
but you don't seem to hear;
I'm close, i say with distance,
to you I'm all but near.

Hello, I say with words,
but you can't read through lines;
I'm scared, I say with smiles,
to you, I must be fine.

Hello, I say to others,
but that word was meant for you;
I'm all right, I say to everyone,
do you also think it's true?

Hello, I say,
but still you don't reply;
hello, I shout,
hello, I cry.

Hello, I wave with hands,
but they're shaky desperate, weak;
I have no air in me to breathe,
look, listen when I speak.

Hello, I say to you,
but you hear and turn away;
hello I scream and scream again -

is goodbye the word to say?

(ii)
Goodbye I breathe with silence,
but still I see you there,
as though my mute confusions
were a signal that I care -

as though my form of leaving
were a toothless paradigm,
and not a painful putsch
against the tyrannies of time.

Goodbye I say to minds
you greet, but the word was meant for you;
I have no time for gland hellos,
I wonder that you do.

Goodbye I say.
yet you remain;
goodbye but, oh.
your're there again!

Goodbye my gingers sign,
but they're shaky, desperate weak;
I have no air in me to breathe,
I have no room to speak.

Goodbye, I shout in turn,
but you still don't turn away;
goodbye, I scream and scream again -

is hello the word to say?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/29/2018 7:18:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. You are indeed a poet.
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Date: 6/9/2018 1:52:00 PM
Beautiful write...
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Date: 6/4/2018 7:34:00 PM
What an amazing poem Yazmin. So completely clever and very enjoyable to read. ~ Judy
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Date: 6/1/2018 10:19:00 PM
I see the passion in your words; good job -JT
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Date: 5/30/2018 4:05:00 PM
A standing ovation for your unique write.. An immense pleasure while reading.. You have an impressive way in composing your genuine words, a rich imagination and a unique style.. Thank you for sharing dear Yazmin. Shine and stay blessed.
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Date: 5/30/2018 3:33:00 PM
Intriguing poetry, love how you constructed it, enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 5/30/2018 9:49:00 AM
I love your poem Yazmin. Nobody likes being ignored, especially when they want to be noticed.
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Date: 5/30/2018 8:54:00 AM
I do think that your poem of this human expression is so well crafted, Yazmin and clever Well done xxoo
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Date: 5/29/2018 6:34:00 PM
Great writing, Yazmin. I really loved the way you played with the idea of whether you use words or not, people just don't get it. The beginning was my favorite and then the last four lines were fantastic how they concluded your poem!
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Date: 5/29/2018 11:56:00 AM
Gingers? Did you mean fingers? Lol... A sad poem about a relationship between two people.. Excellent poem...
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Date: 5/29/2018 11:55:00 AM
From your comments the other day Yasmin I know that this well written verse is from the heart. Tom.
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Date: 5/29/2018 8:32:00 AM
Clever and fun.
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Date: 5/29/2018 7:05:00 AM
You are a brilliant creator, Yazmin. This poem is such a magnificent depiction of two contrasting dialogues true to life. I enjoyed reading this poem from start to finish, being captured by every word you wrote. It's elegant in its simplicity and depth of reach.
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