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The Word

Yes Tony the light n word n thought are one, shining brighter than the sun, thoughts are deeds, creations hum, but man's wit is very rusty, chum... mostimes....Don

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Date: 1/1/2012 3:56:00 PM
Thou wit is never Rusty Don..Oh what woukd we do without you and Tony!Lizzie
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Date: 12/30/2011 9:03:00 PM
Cleverly done, Don. loved how you make it like you're telling somebody. Specially that part about man's wit being rusty (LoL, so true). Wishing you a Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:10:00 AM
THIS is super cool, Don! Very lyrical too and fun! I think a great entry for the rust contest.
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Date: 12/30/2011 3:18:00 AM
Don your wit is never rusty..David
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Date: 12/29/2011 3:41:00 PM
Great write Don! You state the truth on this poem, "...thoughts are deeds..." Very well put! Outstanding Work!!
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