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The Wooden Flute Sings

From the mountain's peak; the wooden flutes sound
the lamas leap and the water falls-- clear,
mindful, the wind's play on the Quechua's ground. 

The majesty of the Andes astounds
for from behind the clouds, the peaks reappear.  
From the mountain's peak; the wooden flutes sound.

Like great red-clay dunes or snow capped mounds;
courts rise and fall in terrain, so austere; 
mindful, the winds play on the Quechua's ground. 

Rainbows of red, blue, and gold oft surround
distant ruins of gray stones, now severe 
from the mountain's peak; the wooden flutes sound.

Solid, earth-bound, sun-browned, lost to the hounds,
so, Quechua shepherds bound stairs cavalier--
mindful; the winds play on the Quechua's ground. 

Pachamama's love surrounds without bounds, 
long gone are the conquers; all life is here,
from the mountain's peak, the wooden flutes sound--
mindful, the winds play on the Quechua's ground. 


* Quechua is one of the native people of Peru
**The Dominican Monks set hounds trained to kill 
on the natives who refused conversion.
*** Pachamama, fertility Godess in Incas Mythos
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 11:05 AM
Super win, Debbie and well deserved. Big Smiles.
Kayode Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Congrats on your worthy win Debbie,this really stands out.
Onclaud Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 2:24 PM
folklore at its finest, Debbie.. round of sweet congrats!
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:18 AM
Congrats, Debbie for this striking poem. The towering mountaintops of the Andes entwined with the heavenly flute... it's really enchanting
De La Luna Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 1:46 AM
this is a lovely piece, Debbie! i got some education, too! love it! Congratulations!
Schumacker Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:49 PM
Hi Debbie, Very well done, thought provoking, and interesting cultural creation about the Peruvian people. Congratulations on an excellent win. Take care. Earl
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 5:47 PM
So well deserved, Deb, you always take the extra step and make your poems something special ! Congrats once again!
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 11:23 AM
excellent informative descriptive write Debbie many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Mandani Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Very nice. Congrats.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Very interesting form you used here Debbie. I am not familiar with it but enjoyed it very much. Your poem was also very interesting and educational. I played Pan Flute myself so I enjoy the picture very much. Congratulations on your winning poem.
Yvonne Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 8:27 AM
Excellent write, Congratulations Debbie, this also gives me the oppurtunity to fav this poem and study this form.
Bianco Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Very well constructed poem Debbie, you must have spent some time crafting this one. Best wishes Anthony
Callus Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win Debbie! Excellent poem that appeals to the senses. I adore those reed pipes; I often stop to listen to them each time I pass the group of talented Peruvian players who entertain at the entrance of our capital city, Valletta. // paul.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 7:33 AM
As always your words stir! Congratulations.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 7:23 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Debbie! As splendid as ever !
Lawless Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 7:07 AM
and so the winds blow again in a wonderful and thought provoking poem. Thanks Debbie
May Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:21 AM
Congrats on a great win Debbie....
Zerbst Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Great poem. I can especially tell the work that went into it after working with this form for the first time recently. I like playing a quena, which is similar or the same as the instrument pictured here. Mine is endblown, with simply a notch carved in the end that makes the sound. Blessings, Isaiah
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 3:49 PM
Thanks for this wonderful example of Terzanelle, dear Debbie! I intend to contribute to Richard's contest on terzanelle ending with a questionku! Pretty challenging! Your example is a masterpiece as usual! And I bow before your Suzette Prime...God bless you, your family and your work: have a very happy new Year! Love, Hanitra
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 3:40 PM
hi cool lady, love this. I know a lady that plays those pipes and sings opera as well she is blind but amazing on the wooden flute pipes . Love this xx happy new Year to you
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 10:40 AM
Hi Debbie See my response to your comment on my last Poem.
Macmillan Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 8:26 AM
WOW! Like this more and more each time I read this. xox DEE Sent you a soupie :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 6:50 AM
I enjoyed your Poem, interesting use of the form, it gave the poem a unique rythm that somehow helped connect it with the landscape and history. Happy Newyear Debbie.
Ryerson Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 7:11 PM
Sounds like you must have recently visited that area?...If so I'm extremely jealous and insist on you taking me there!...A real gem, cher - Tim
Goff Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 9:03 AM
Beautiful, Deb....i knew an explanation for snoring was comin! Poetry moves you @ 30,000 feet! jimbo
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