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From the mountain's peak; the wooden flutes sound the lamas leap and the water falls-- clear, mindful, the wind's play on the Quechua's ground. The majesty of the Andes astounds for from behind the clouds, the peaks reappear. From the mountain's peak; the wooden flutes sound. Like great red-clay dunes or snow capped mounds; courts rise and fall in terrain, so austere; mindful, the winds play on the Quechua's ground. Rainbows of red, blue, and gold oft surround distant ruins of gray stones, now severe from the mountain's peak; the wooden flutes sound. Solid, earth-bound, sun-browned, lost to the hounds, so, Quechua shepherds bound stairs cavalier-- mindful; the winds play on the Quechua's ground. Pachamama's love surrounds without bounds, long gone are the conquers; all life is here, from the mountain's peak, the wooden flutes sound-- mindful, the winds play on the Quechua's ground. * Quechua is one of the native people of Peru **The Dominican Monks set hounds trained to kill on the natives who refused conversion. *** Pachamama, fertility Godess in Incas Mythos

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Date: 10/14/2014 11:05:00 AM
Super win, Debbie and well deserved. Big Smiles.
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Date: 10/13/2014 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on your worthy win Debbie,this really stands out.
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Date: 10/12/2014 2:24:00 PM
folklore at its finest, Debbie.. round of sweet congrats!
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Date: 10/12/2014 11:18:00 AM
Congrats, Debbie for this striking poem. The towering mountaintops of the Andes entwined with the heavenly flute... it's really enchanting
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Date: 10/12/2014 1:46:00 AM
this is a lovely piece, Debbie! i got some education, too! love it! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/11/2014 6:49:00 PM
Hi Debbie, Very well done, thought provoking, and interesting cultural creation about the Peruvian people. Congratulations on an excellent win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:47:00 PM
So well deserved, Deb, you always take the extra step and make your poems something special ! Congrats once again!
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Date: 10/11/2014 11:23:00 AM
excellent informative descriptive write Debbie many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/11/2014 10:58:00 AM
Very nice. Congrats.
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Date: 10/11/2014 9:00:00 AM
Very interesting form you used here Debbie. I am not familiar with it but enjoyed it very much. Your poem was also very interesting and educational. I played Pan Flute myself so I enjoy the picture very much. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 10/11/2014 8:27:00 AM
Excellent write, Congratulations Debbie, this also gives me the oppurtunity to fav this poem and study this form.
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Date: 10/11/2014 8:03:00 AM
Very well constructed poem Debbie, you must have spent some time crafting this one. Best wishes Anthony
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Date: 10/11/2014 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win Debbie! Excellent poem that appeals to the senses. I adore those reed pipes; I often stop to listen to them each time I pass the group of talented Peruvian players who entertain at the entrance of our capital city, Valletta. // paul.
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Date: 10/11/2014 7:33:00 AM
As always your words stir! Congratulations.
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Date: 10/11/2014 7:23:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Debbie! As splendid as ever !
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Date: 10/11/2014 7:07:00 AM
and so the winds blow again in a wonderful and thought provoking poem. Thanks Debbie
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Date: 10/11/2014 6:21:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Debbie....
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Date: 1/8/2013 6:34:00 PM
Great poem. I can especially tell the work that went into it after working with this form for the first time recently. I like playing a quena, which is similar or the same as the instrument pictured here. Mine is endblown, with simply a notch carved in the end that makes the sound. Blessings, Isaiah
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Date: 1/2/2013 3:49:00 PM
Thanks for this wonderful example of Terzanelle, dear Debbie! I intend to contribute to Richard's contest on terzanelle ending with a questionku! Pretty challenging! Your example is a masterpiece as usual! And I bow before your Suzette Prime...God bless you, your family and your work: have a very happy new Year! Love, Hanitra
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Date: 12/31/2012 3:40:00 PM
hi cool lady, love this. I know a lady that plays those pipes and sings opera as well she is blind but amazing on the wooden flute pipes . Love this xx happy new Year to you
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Date: 12/31/2012 10:40:00 AM
Hi Debbie See my response to your comment on my last Poem.
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Date: 12/31/2012 8:26:00 AM
WOW! Like this more and more each time I read this. xox DEE Sent you a soupie :)
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Date: 12/31/2012 6:50:00 AM
I enjoyed your Poem, interesting use of the form, it gave the poem a unique rythm that somehow helped connect it with the landscape and history. Happy Newyear Debbie.
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Date: 12/30/2012 7:11:00 PM
Sounds like you must have recently visited that area?...If so I'm extremely jealous and insist on you taking me there!...A real gem, cher - Tim
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Date: 12/30/2012 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful, Deb....i knew an explanation for snoring was comin! Poetry moves you @ 30,000 feet! jimbo
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