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The Wondrous Spectacle

In late March one starts thinking of spring with those cherry blossoms that a few days ago were small buds, but frost kept them from blooming and show their splendor; would a fierce wind disperse them? In a remote forest, there are firs that cast shadows over paths; from far one hears a horse snorting as his hooves clip-clop, wanting to stop and refresh by the tiny pound swarming with docks and they are startled by his neighing and swim away. I look up to measure the distance between me and the firs' branches, and waving they let sun rays gleam; a hummingbird lands a few feet from me as he warbles cheerfully. I decide to take an afternoon nap and lay on a bed made of fresh leaves, above sunlight filters through the gaps between the long branches tinted with the orange pollen of hibiscus; I sneeze twice frightening a squirrel that is chewing on a bunch of walnuts that someone has dropped intentionally. Dusk comes and I am still napping heavily, someone coming from the opposite path warns me of snakes crawling at this hour, " You don't want to get bitten by one of them! " I get up still day-dreaming and thank him; and following the same path, I took before, I head home admiring the wondrous spectacle.

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Date: 4/22/2018 4:40:00 PM
You paint a wonderful afternoon, Andrew. Well done.
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 4/22/2018 8:23:00 PM
Good evening, Line. How are you? Thank you for your kind comment. I have just made a few changes that I overlooked before I enter it in Graig's Cornish contest, Spring. It's a pleasure to hear from you. Enjoy your evening. Kind Regards, Andrew.

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