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The Wonder of You

When I look in your eyes I see the look of love Filled with desire and passion You’re sent from heaven above When I’m close to you I feel all warm inside What we share is special So glad I’m by your side When I’m in your arms You set my world on fire The two of us together You are my heart’s desire Jan Allison 18th August 2014

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Richard Nnoli

Date: 8/18/2014 4:46:00 PM

So beautiful,nice love poem ,enjoyed reading Richard

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 4:47:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Richard:-) hugs jan xxx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 8/18/2014 2:25:00 PM

Oh my, Jan. I think I am in love again. (It will be the 3rd time today...) Very romantic and very well written! Jim

J. R. Corbin
Date: 8/18/2014 3:18:00 PM

They should. Tim is an excellent poet. I really enjoy his work, and his poems are inspirational.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 2:28:00 PM

OHHH Jim who is the lucky lady! i'm not good at romantic write but Tim Smith's poems inspire me so i thought I would give it a go:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/18/2014 10:47:00 AM

How romantic Jan !! Wonderful write!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 10:57:00 AM

Thank you Dr Sharma - it's not my usual style but Tim Smith's romantic writes are rubbing off on me:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/18/2014 9:38:00 AM

Magnificent write on love and romance, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 9:43:00 AM

Thank you so much for those kind words - I'm learning -its not my usual style and I appreciate the feedback:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/18/2014 9:13:00 AM

Sweet, lovely love. How are you doing, Jan. Stopping by on a rainy West Virginia morning to say hello, read your pretty verse and say thanks for visiting me. I would rather pay you a visit than send a reply. I do appreciate all you do to keep people encouraged. I do what I can, but life gets hectic sometimes. lol Plus, I like to write and I do not do that fast.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 9:15:00 AM

I'm lucky I'm on school holiday and mum is at the day centre and dad just wants to be left in peace and quiet - got memory clinic meeting with mum tomorrow - hope i remember to go! Thanks for dropping by Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/18/2014 8:54:00 AM

Very romantic Jan....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 10:05:00 AM

:-) and my nortiness is catching up on you LOL *** blushes*** hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 8/18/2014 9:47:00 AM

That's a good thing sweetie :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 8:56:00 AM

Makes a change for me - see your influence is catching! Hugs jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/18/2014 8:46:00 AM

Oh Jan! Aren't you adorably sweet! :) Love this piece. It is beautiful and sweet...just like the one who wrote it. HUGS

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 8:57:00 AM

You have great beauty - I don't think i do on the outside but I do on the inside:-)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2014 8:49:00 AM

YOU HAVE HUMOR! I don't...AND...you ARE a romantic writer! ;) Love this! I tend to ramble...you get to the point! Much better, I'm told! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 8:48:00 AM

Aww i will never make a romantic writer like you Eileen.. but i occasionally do have my moments LOL Hugs jan xxx