The Wonder of a Smile

She was plain.. Quiet, unassuming Yet she set his heart afire. She was plain..until she smiled.

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Matthew Brackley

Date: 5/21/2009 8:52:00 PM

yes,this poem has it all, full of love and promise!.thx for reading mine.matt

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/18/2009 5:46:00 PM

Smile could always brigthen our day. You made my day with your SMILE my friend. Thank you for the warm comment on my WIFE. I am okay. Thank you for the concern. Love. Ernilando

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2009 8:00:00 PM

Hi Barbara. You have mail!

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/13/2009 12:24:00 PM

This makes the rest of us smile, as well!! A winning reflection of what a smile can do!! Lovely thought!~ Love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/13/2009 11:41:00 AM

A smile can simply radiate an entire being. Amazing poetic expression here. Such truth well stated. In fact, AWESOME! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 5/12/2009 11:37:00 PM

So so true BG.Rgds Brian &thanks for your welcome comments

Donna Golden

Date: 5/12/2009 10:10:00 PM

Oooh, this is lovely, Barbara! Your piece is a great example of how a few aptly spoken words can speak volumes. Love. It. <3 Donna

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2009 7:55:00 PM

People do seem radiant when they smile, Barbara. No one appears to us as "plain" when they are smiling. Guess it's the positive energy a smile conveys. Very nice poem! Love, Carolyn