The Woman In the Mirror

Who is that woman
That follows me around
She mimics everything I do
But she doesn't make a sound
She looks somewhat like me
 More mature I must confess
Although her hair is grayer
She copies the way I dress!

She only appears in the mirror
Whenever I primp and preen
She's the spitting image of me
Except for the years between
Who is that aging woman
What does she want with me?
She always appears on my birthday
I wish she’d let me be

Now that I am eighty three
I thought I saw a tear
Did I say I'm eighty three?
It couldn’t be THAT year!
I’m still in my prime
Having fun and loving life
Getting into trouble
No worries, strain or strife

It must be HER birthday
We celebrate today
I wish her health and happiness
And good luck along the way
But she's really getting old
What more can I say
Why is she in my mirror?
I just wish she‘d go away!

Copyright©2011 Beatrice Boyle
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/8/2011 11:22:00 PM
this is so charming, B! the mirror lies! stunning... hope to see more of your gems!..:) huggs, nette
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Beatrice Boyle
Date: 7/8/2011 11:50:00 PM
Oops...so sorry nette, the reply below was intended for my poem His Hand Is On My Shoulder. I hit the wrong button. Senior Moment! (I often have Senior Months!!) lol Thank you for your kind words to my Mirror poem...of course that woman in the mirror was a complete stranger.....wasn't she???? Bea
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Beatrice Boyle
Date: 7/8/2011 11:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem. We are never truly alone...God is always right behind us to help lighten the load. Sometimes what we think is a trial we cannot get through, we discover that it makes us stronger and lead to something better for us in the end. keep the faith my friend. Bea
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