The Wolf Comes

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This is actually the Shadorma form which is a Spanish style six line syllabic poem of 3/5/3 3/7/5 as below. This form is not on our list of forms.

The wolf comes, Slinking to your door, Un-noticed. Continue, Blithely go your way, eyes closed. Oblivious fool.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/17/2019 5:08:00 PM

Nicely pinned, thanks for reading my Contentment poem, I wrote it because I was cold. And I wanted to snuggle up in a blanket :)

Judy Ball
Date: 10/30/2019 4:57:00 PM

Thank you so much Debbie. God Bless, JB

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2019 4:07:00 PM

It's amazing how they find me, too. Well done.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/3/2019 1:45:00 PM

I used to be this fool in my youth. Now I err on the side of caution. Nicely penned Judy. : ) xxoo

Judy Ball
Date: 5/3/2019 4:33:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie. God Bless, JB

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/3/2019 8:21:00 AM

Good one, Judy. Caution is definitely the order of the day.

Judy Ball
Date: 5/3/2019 4:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Line. God Bless, JB

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/3/2019 1:58:00 AM

You just don't know what's coming sometimes, stay awake at all times. I like this form a Spanish haiku. Tom

Judy Ball
Date: 5/3/2019 4:31:00 AM

Thanks bunches Tom. Me too. God Bless, JB