The Wolf

One day a wolf sat, Awaiting a tasty cat. Then he spotted a beaver; His teeth, they cleaved her; He’s in heaven now…bear attacked!

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Date: 10/25/2018 2:24:00 PM

Of course, I had to view this one... Felt that last line more than most! :) Gershon WOLF

Date: 10/23/2018 3:47:00 PM

Hahaha... Interesting twist!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/23/2018 3:53:00 PM

Thanks; it happens...of course, hunger wipes out all reason, so to a hungry wolf a bear might look like a house cat.

Date: 10/23/2018 3:04:00 PM

Poetic justice in a limerick.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/23/2018 3:47:00 PM

Yep...it's a perk...and I love it. Thanks.

Date: 10/23/2018 2:57:00 PM

As the saying goes what comes around goes around lol. Tom.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/23/2018 3:03:00 PM

So true, thanks Tom.

Date: 10/23/2018 2:55:00 PM

well written ML!:-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/23/2018 3:03:00 PM

Many thanks, Jan.