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The Wishing Star

The sky has a star In darkness it shines With the shinning moon This bright star stands out In the moon lit sky I make a big wish Then hope it comes true

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/24/2020 5:44:00 PM

I remember once making a wish like yours, Darlene. Who knows if we both wished on the same star! Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/25/2020 9:37:00 AM

Hello Paul Callus, yes who knows that we both wished on the same star. Perhaps we made the same wish. Regards Darlene

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/18/2020 11:40:00 AM

When we wish with all our heart the wish come true dearest, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 1:00:00 PM

Hello Demetios, Thank you. I am wishing for something it has not come true yet. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Gideon Foli

Date: 4/17/2020 6:56:00 PM

In times of darkness, we shine as stars. Awesomely impressive piece Darlene. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 9:34:00 AM

Hello Gideon Foli,I agree in times of darkness we shone as stars.Thank you for this lovely comment. Be safe. Enjoy your day my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/17/2020 2:59:00 PM

We can all use a few wishes these days. Enjoyed.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 9:35:00 AM

Hello M.L. Kiser, oh I agree we can all use a few wishes. be safe . Enjoy your day my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/17/2020 12:22:00 PM

I love this poem and I love stars and the moon so I definitely am faving this write - Beautiful Darlene. Blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2020 1:43:00 PM

Hello Jennifer, the stars and moon are beautiful. thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/16/2020 5:34:00 PM

I love to wish on a star when I see the first one. Great job. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2020 6:51:00 PM

Hello Judy Ball, I also wish upon the brightest star for my wish. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice evening my friend. Be safe.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/13/2020 4:57:00 PM

Me, too. I wish I could travel and see you! ~ Joy and Light, Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 5:50:00 PM

Hello Gershon Wolf, Oh -how nice. Enjoy your evening my friend. Be safe my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/13/2020 1:30:00 PM

I hope so too Darlene, see it in your mind, it will come! Happy Monday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 5:52:00 PM

Hello Mike Gentile, oh I see it also every time I wish upon the star. Be safe. Enjoy your evening my friend. xxxx-ooo Happy Monday.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/12/2020 11:31:00 PM

I love it, Darlene. Very clear imagery, especially! Your friend, Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 8:06:00 AM

Hello Panagiota,I always wish on the brightest star. I like the dark sky with the full moon. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/12/2020 3:38:00 PM

The night sky is amazing, reminds me of diamonds on black velvet. Hope your wish comes true. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 8:10:00 AM

Hello Tom, Oh ! yes the sky looks likes velvet and stars like diamonds. Thank you . I hope you had a lovely Easter. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2020 1:52:00 PM

... I make a wish, together with you Darlene :) - A gem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/25/2020 2:22:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, okay lets make a wish together.Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. be safe. hugs.