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The Winter Night

Nights are freezing but loneliness colder Shelter sought in the land of the living dead Beauty has departed the eye of the beholder To great opportunity he once quickly fled All of his words now stained with his dread Winter winds bite howling through the night Joined by a taunting ghost of Christmas past The future ever becoming a world of fright The coldness in his heart how long can it last How did this happen it all transpired so fast Rain falls harder than stones cast in shame The night rolls on time moving slow as ever Where is it that he can transfer the final blame Seeking love sometimes a very cold endeavor Can the winter night end or will it last forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/25/2013 11:51:00 PM
How's It going my Texas, Friend... :) Enjoying the holidays I hope... LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2013 11:10:00 PM
You're Texas friend, good that means we're on the same side. I mean in case of poetry war lol. I want to be aligned with the destroyer haha. My holiday is going ok how about you? I hope everything is going smoothly and pleasantly for you. I know it's probably an adjustment, but I hope everything went well.
Date: 12/24/2013 12:28:00 AM
Surrounded by the beauty of winter and still so sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/24/2013 2:48:00 AM
Well winter is known in literature as the dark time, the time of death, and I think I was using that some. Statistically the further north you go from the equator, the higher rates of depression and suicide. I am like your comment though, seeing a certain beauty of winter and usually enjoying it.
Date: 12/23/2013 8:13:00 AM
Wayland,, Congratulations, sending Christmas cheers. .. love Linda <3
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 12/24/2013 2:43:00 AM
Thanks so much for the Christmas wishes and your comment on my poem.
Date: 12/23/2013 6:29:00 AM
deep thoughts Wayland enjoyed it 7 congrats on win "season's greetings" Shadow x smile hug
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 12/24/2013 2:42:00 AM
Seasons Greetings yes that's the politically correct way of saying it. I was trying to remember that earlier. Thanks so much for reading and your comment. Merry Christmas to you.
Date: 12/21/2013 9:04:00 AM
A deep message here, worthy of more than one read. congrats. Bg
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 12/24/2013 2:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for your one read here and your comment.
Date: 12/21/2013 7:37:00 AM
great job Wayland, congrats on your winning entry in my contest
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Date: 11/30/2013 11:50:00 PM
Lovely flow of thoughts on winter night, best of luck in the contest, wayland
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 12/3/2013 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta for your comment and thanks for taking time to read.

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