The Winter Cemetery

THE WINTER CEMETERY Awaken my nightmare! Cold, wrinkled skin, eye circles beyond care. Tears of beautiful snow. O depths to which they go! A horse and carriage show. The gate — a cliff of iron bars, mine heir. The creak of springs, the box — ornate, carries my frozen heart, on blocks of ice — my pretty niece. Oh shroud of snow, I cease to live - i have no peace! O that cancerous gong of Winter clocks! Wrapped in woolen fetters, I boldly stare at these money-getters. The doc misdiagnosed, and the nurse overdosed. In an icebox — her ghost. This cemetery shivers with debtors. She’ll be buried next to you, beloved son, youth taken by flu. I lean on the hard chest. Winter blooms on my breast. Dear son, I’ll never rest! Cold stones, for bounty, as my flames accrue. 12/20/2017 Rhyme Me A Poem Contest Broken Wings - Sponsor
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January 14, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Congratulations on your win Kim with this very sad, beautiful poem! ~Judy
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January 15, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thanks, Judith!
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January 12, 2018 at 8:23 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem.
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January 15, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thanks, Richard!
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January 12, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write as only you can do, well done !
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January 15, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thank you, Constance! :)
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January 12, 2018 at 5:32 AM
back with my congrats :) -luloo
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January 15, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks, Luloo!
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January 11, 2018 at 11:10 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
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January 15, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks, Line!
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January 11, 2018 at 10:53 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Kim,, so very sad , but beautiful.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Thank you, Eve!
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December 20, 2017 at 2:41 PM
- You have described this so vividly ... a cold place without love ... The place gives me goosebumps - Luck in the contest, Kim - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 20, 2017 at 9:39 PM
Merry Christmas to you, Anne-Lise and your family too! Thanks, sweetie!
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December 20, 2017 at 11:56 AM
Hi Kim, You have penned such a well written dark piece. The content and rhymes are superb. You should do well in the contest. Best wishes- Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 9:38 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis!
One Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Wow.. this is excellent imagery.. you really created a scene here..deep and sad also.. very well written Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Thanks so much, my friend!
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December 20, 2017 at 10:38 AM
This is excellent, Kim - you wrote an impressive poem and I love it. All the best ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 11:05 AM
Thanks so much for saying so! Hugs, my friend!
Scars Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 10:11 AM
so sadly beautiful sweet Kim, good luck in the contest! :)-luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 11:05 AM
Thank you, dear sweet Luloo!
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