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The Winner

I don’t know why I said it, But Mom gave her head a spin, When I claimed, “I’m so unlucky That I simply cannot win.” She pinned me with her gray eyes, And she said, “I beg to differ.” I straightened up my shoulders and I stood a little stiffer. When Mom called for attention, Attention is what she got. I knew that listening to her Was much better than to not. “How can you say you are unlucky, When you have everything you need? You’ve your mom and dad and brothers. We all love you, yes indeed. Do you know there are some children Who have no family at all? You have never been alone an hour. We all answer to your call. Daddy works hard to feed and clothe you And I keep you combed and clean. To say that you’re unlucky Is untrue and very mean.” Her voice softened as she noticed The big tears in my brown eyes. “That you thought you were unlucky, Is to me a big surprise.” Satisfied I’d learned my lesson, She turned from me with a smile. “Now run away and play Dear. Supper’s in a little while.” If I were to start complaining I’d recall her words again. I’d remind myself that I’ve been lucky And I always, always win.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/7/2012 10:31:00 PM
Joyce, congratulations In Joe's contest. Nice to see this contest finally up ;-) Good night PD
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:19:00 AM
A wonderful lesson your mom instilled in you......beautifully written. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/4/2012 10:00:00 AM
Another gem Joyce. Congratulations
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Date: 7/3/2012 8:16:00 PM
Joyce, this is a wonderful lesson to learn at a young age. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/3/2012 5:41:00 PM
Beautiful and nice,Joyce.This is really a winner.Congratulations on your well deserved win....
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Date: 7/3/2012 3:35:00 PM
Congraulations. This was a very enjoyable read.
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "I Just Can't Win" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2012 12:48:00 PM
Congrats Joyce. We should all heed thiese wonderful words. *smiles* Tanya
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Date: 7/3/2012 3:33:00 AM
Joyce congrats on your win! I love how you end your poems in a positive note.
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:08:00 AM
Joyce congrats on your win, an excellent write..David
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Outstanding. Great job. Thanks for your comments. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 7/2/2012 7:42:00 PM
A wonderful message, Joyce. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/2/2012 6:41:00 PM
Mother's know how to make a point...and I think your mother's message was a keeper! Good story, Joyce!
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Date: 7/2/2012 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 7/2/2012 5:47:00 PM
Great advice for everyone, Joyce. Lovely piece of work. Congrats. :)
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Date: 7/2/2012 4:47:00 PM
Hi Joyce, You wrote a really nice poem here! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/18/2012 4:27:00 PM
This is very well written. There are a lot of people that feel like that, but they don't know how lucky they are. You are a true winner. Lucilla
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