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My Wings

I was enveloped in buds bleeding crimson affection, wearing ivory silk to cover my flaws- redeemed by a man of virtuous value, wearing eyes only seeing me beautiful; we seek desirable attachment through intimacy, becoming one dulcet soul; I’m enchanted by who he is and who he will grow to be- sharing felicity at dawn and passion at night, fearing not kismet but yearning for more years with me by his side (holding frail hands) like pebbles along the tidal beach he surfaces me with resonating wonder a dalliance of romance feeds us until our starvation becomes nourished- "and yes, my love, you nourish me..." our connection feeds not on mistrust but truth (the Word of God sings) I shall flee with only him if he’ll let me- for I am his butterfly... and he is my wings Date - November 1, 2019

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Date: 12/24/2019 9:30:00 AM
Laura wow once more your words amaze me! Congrats on a top win!;)
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Date: 11/6/2019 1:26:00 PM
Beautifully written poem. "Wearing ivory silk to hide my flaws-" Just beautiful. Congrats on your top win :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/8/2019 6:10:00 AM
thank you so much sweet Heather x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/6/2019 2:26:00 AM
"our connection feeds not on mistrust but truth " - this one deserved a win. Glad she got it.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/6/2019 9:46:00 AM
thank you so much caring Caren- you are the sweetest x:)-luloo
Date: 11/3/2019 6:33:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Laura Loo! Congrats on your win! :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/6/2019 9:46:00 AM
thank you so much lovely Laura! x:)-luloo
Date: 11/3/2019 1:40:00 PM
Lu Loo, congrats on your win with such a great entry. You are a 'daughter' to be proud of. I can't seem to get any rating from Chantelle except N/A. I guess I'll stop disappointing myself and not enter any contests she sponsors.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/3/2019 2:33:00 PM
hmmm...I'm sorry you didn't place dear friend- I appreciate your kind comment dad, as always x:)-luloo
Date: 11/3/2019 8:02:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/3/2019 2:31:00 PM
thank you sweet SMILE! x:)-luloo
Date: 11/2/2019 6:47:00 PM
"only seeing me beautiful" my favorite line. Ann
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/3/2019 2:30:00 PM
it's so true about my hubby. I still don't know why after 23 years with him. Thank you so much sweet Ann x:)-luloo
Date: 11/2/2019 5:57:00 PM
Awesome piece here, Luloo:-) Incidentally, my debut poem here is also called "Wings of A Butterfly". But this one is better!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/3/2019 2:29:00 PM
really? I didn't know! and I'm sure yours was not better silly man. I appreciate your kindness always, x:) -luloo
Date: 11/2/2019 7:11:00 AM
woah great use of vocabulary.. what a lovely poem...
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/2/2019 11:40:00 AM
Thanks dear SO for stopping by, its refreshing to see you- be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 11/1/2019 1:58:00 PM
Beautifully done Luloo. Loves those ending lines. Best wishes in the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/2/2019 11:39:00 AM
Thank you once again dear Chris :)-luloo

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