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The Wine and the Cat It

One night after I drank all the red wine, The label I hide on the wine bottle. They told me of the psycho cat’s demise, I thought it was a really bad dream. Sabbatical dreams after quarantine, are about to put me over the edge. Eerie boardwalk creaks near the white sand beach, found the cat drinking from the wine bottle. Date Written: 9/5/2020 Collaborate With Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 9/8/2020 12:40:00 PM
Very creatively executed, Paula--great ending line. All the best.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/8/2020 12:52:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. It was fun to write. Have a great day.............
Date: 9/8/2020 11:59:00 AM
- Very well done ... and fun, Paula :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/8/2020 12:34:00 PM
Thank You, for writing, for your kind words and for your luck. Glad you like this one. Have a day with hugs...........
Date: 9/8/2020 10:26:00 AM
enjoyed the wit that shines through this remarkable work, paula..huggs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/8/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thanks for your note and kind words. Glad you like it. Have a day with hugs..................
Date: 9/8/2020 10:13:00 AM
This is really cute, Paula, and you made great comic use of the lines Kim provided for her fun contest. Best wishes for a big win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/8/2020 11:17:00 AM
Thanks for your note, your best wishes and kind words. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day with hugs..................
Date: 9/7/2020 7:10:00 PM
Sounds a trip to the Twilight Zone to me... You ladies can 'do Bizarre!' ~ Teetotaling Tabby
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/8/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Watch out for the cat. Enjoy your day writing away....................
Date: 9/6/2020 1:45:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. This was a fun read my friend!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2020 7:53:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day writing away....................

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