The Wine and Me

A glass of wine helps me to relax.

   My inhibitions become quite lax

     But after three or four

        You'll find me on the floor,

  So out of it I could sleep on tacks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/18/2011 4:41:00 PM
nicely penned, good luck with your contest. cory
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Date: 6/18/2011 4:20:00 PM
watch out for ol cousin Wayne, he's flashing through the ether, the specialist back door man, butt sore n sure to greet ya. great verse babe, love Don
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Francine Roberts
Date: 6/18/2011 4:39:00 PM
crude Don
Date: 6/18/2011 4:07:00 PM
beautiful poetry today, have a good one.
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Date: 6/18/2011 2:18:00 AM
LOL I can't handle more than a glass or two, Francine. A great example for your contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/17/2011 6:49:00 PM
heheheh, ah dear what will become of me, flows well babe, xox, Don
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Date: 6/17/2011 5:33:00 PM
Interesting information..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:38:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Francine. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2011 10:08:00 AM
Nice write on the effect of wine, sometimes enjoyable, Francine
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:04:00 AM
An excellent limerick example for your newest contest, Francine, perhaps I should have a glass of wine or two, oh heck why not the bottle, first to get in the mood before writing my limerick!!
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Date: 6/17/2011 7:53:00 AM
Excellent entry, Francine. Enjoyed. Best of luck. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/16/2011 10:20:00 PM
oh, so now I see why you did this one. I just noticed your contest !!
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Date: 6/16/2011 9:02:00 PM
Good one, Francine. So what made you think of this one? Were you partying last night? You have great humor always!
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Date: 6/16/2011 8:47:00 PM
Francine, this one made me smile. Stopped by to say thanks for the first place win...I was rather in shock! I'd spent hours trying to come up with a "heaving bossom" type of poem (I write romance, too), and something different flowed out. Isn't writing amazing? Sometimes the pen has a mind of its own, doesn't it? Ah, now there would be a contest...if your pen took over ... ;-) Anyways, thanks, I feel like Sally Fields winning an oscar, "THEY LIKE ME, THEY REALLY LIKE ME!" Hugs from Cyndi
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Date: 6/16/2011 7:29:00 PM
So very true...for me anyway....good luck in the contest!
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Francine Roberts
Date: 6/16/2011 7:30:00 PM
can't very well enter my own contest, but thanks
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