The Winds of Autumn

The winds of autumn Are teasing the falling leaves, Playing hide and seek.

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Susan Mills

Date: 9/2/2010 9:26:00 AM

clever and witty poem. Much enjoyed since fall haikus are my favorite!

Carol Fillmore

Date: 9/1/2010 11:54:00 AM

I really enjoy this haiku, Francine, the playful mood is delightful. Thanks for sharing. Thanks so much for your comments on my recent post, so appreciated! Carol

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/1/2010 9:19:00 AM

Brilliant imagery in this lovely written Haiku. Beautiful write my friend. And many thanks for your appreciation of my poem Tree Roots and the Light. Love and best wishes .....Ravindra...Francine Roberts.

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 9/1/2010 8:03:00 AM

great imagery. enjoyed your haiku today. keep up the good work.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 7:48:00 AM

Enjoyed the playful quality of your haiku, Francine! Best wishes in the Falling Leaves contest. Love, Carolyn