'the Windmiller's Guest'

'The Windmiller's Guest'

I faced him, with my back to love
Above the village street. 
And, told him, 'No', that I thought of
Adventures less concrete. 

This land ship held no hope for me
Of life beyond this place
And, with my answer I could see
The look upon his face. 

His pipe he held unsatisfied,
Still, love his only view,
Like roses past their bloom had died
And lost their fragrant hue. 

©deborah burch
3.19.2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 28, 2013 at 9:33 PM
love your winning poem..always~ Linda
Williams Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 8:58 AM
love this great read
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 2:53 PM
Glad to see you made the winners' list, sweetie. Congrats to you.
Squyres Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 1:42 PM
A different take than most on this painting... I like it !! Well done and congrats on your win !!
Ellison Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 6:57 AM
You're avatar gets me every time! Looks like you're enjoying life like me! Your words bring this poem visually to life! Kudos! Hugs, Jack xox
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 7:09 AM
A very good poem, like the way you wrote it. - Very, very clever Deborah! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 12:43 AM
wow, you did yours so much more succinctly than I did mine and yet you said so much more in your brevity than I did in mine. WEll, I took the theme in a completely different direction. I enjoy the uniqueness of yours.
Williams Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 3:24 PM
cap'n Deb this is a very visual poetic write, I love it...David
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March 20, 2013 at 6:25 AM
liked it, especially " This land ship held no hope for me Of life beyond this place" good job :)
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