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'the Windmiller's Guest'

'The Windmiller's Guest' I faced him, with my back to love Above the village street. And, told him, 'No', that I thought of Adventures less concrete. This land ship held no hope for me Of life beyond this place And, with my answer I could see The look upon his face. His pipe he held unsatisfied, Still, love his only view, Like roses past their bloom had died And lost their fragrant hue. ©deborah burch 3.19.2013

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Date: 3/28/2013 9:33:00 PM
love your winning poem..always~ Linda
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Date: 3/26/2013 8:58:00 AM
love this great read
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Date: 3/25/2013 2:53:00 PM
Glad to see you made the winners' list, sweetie. Congrats to you.
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Date: 3/25/2013 1:42:00 PM
A different take than most on this painting... I like it !! Well done and congrats on your win !!
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Date: 3/24/2013 6:57:00 AM
You're avatar gets me every time! Looks like you're enjoying life like me! Your words bring this poem visually to life! Kudos! Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 3/23/2013 7:09:00 AM
A very good poem, like the way you wrote it. - Very, very clever Deborah! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2013 12:43:00 AM
wow, you did yours so much more succinctly than I did mine and yet you said so much more in your brevity than I did in mine. WEll, I took the theme in a completely different direction. I enjoy the uniqueness of yours.
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Date: 3/20/2013 3:24:00 PM
cap'n Deb this is a very visual poetic write, I love it...David
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Date: 3/20/2013 6:25:00 AM
liked it, especially " This land ship held no hope for me Of life beyond this place" good job :)
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