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The Wind and Her

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Sitting here between sheets of glass I move freely clothed by the gloaming of a beautiful morning I am a nonreflective wind in motion this moment washing over her with pink taffeta clouds watching the scene below, it's as if this birth that will be a yawning yore soon is the only art in her eyes, that truly matters.

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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/28/2022 1:43:00 PM
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A beauty floats above and away, the moment here, then gone. Beautiful writing my dear friend. Alice
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/26/2022 8:34:00 PM
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"I am a nonreflective wind in motion this moment washing over her with pink taffeta clouds watching" The wizard behind the curtain, the unseen power aloft fluffing our minds with scent and fantastic vision.... Did you also do the lovely art my friend? Blessings!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/27/2022 3:54:00 PM
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Yes I like to put photos with the words, in 3D, thanks for reading dear poet friend
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Mike Bayles
Date: 10/26/2022 6:45:00 PM
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I am truly captured by the moment, and the moment that only matters is art.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/27/2022 4:08:00 PM
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Yes Mike, the only thing that matters is the moment, thanks for reading
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Bill Baker
Date: 10/26/2022 4:28:00 PM
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Beauty and depth of thought, Vie. They both moved me through your poetry. Blessings my friend. Bill
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/27/2022 4:08:00 PM
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Thank you, Bill. This was written early morning while watching the gloaming of a lovely sky
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Sotto Poet
Date: 10/26/2022 11:56:00 AM
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Rose, Your poetry includes some really vivid descriptions and metaphors. Excellent writing with such a fantastic and profound degree of insight.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/27/2022 4:07:00 PM
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Thank you for reading and understanding the message Sotto
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/26/2022 8:08:00 AM
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Great personification. I am gone with the wind.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/27/2022 4:07:00 PM
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My too Victor, thanks for reading :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2022 5:33:00 AM
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The wind has the view--so does the writer. Well written my friend.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/27/2022 4:07:00 PM
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I love the wind, and all it represents, thanks for reading Vijay

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