Poet Destroyer A Poet Free verse

The Wind

~~The Wind~~
            
Look into my eyes
Follow me into a world of ecstasy
There and only there
Will you find the peace to unwind
       ~
Beautiful brown eyes not blue
Shady lids, stunning  ocean view
Embracing every word 

Hear the wind whisper your name
Come with me
Drown with me
Into the abyss of loving rain
Embrace this moment as I draw you in with words
Release you with the warmth -------I was there

I Share--I take
I LOVE--I HATE
Into my arms
I am the charm
Around your neck
Around your wrist
Listen to the voice of my beating heart
It yearns
The freedom of touch
The freedom of speech. 
Of love, 
Of purity
Like the wind
I'll find my way
Into your heart
Arouse cheerful energy
Of your insecurity and pen
Follow me into the sea
There we will fall into the deep
Build sand castles 
Around dreams of reality
Slip into my aura light 
Set to the rhythm of the oceanic night

Now, listen to the breeze
It's called out your name
It's only a matter of time----------------
You'll find yourself calling out...... mine

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Paul Arnold November 24, 2016 at 8:31 PM I really enjoyed this poem and you are so gifted as a writer. I only wish that I could write so well !

Abul Ghazanfar June 25, 2016 at 11:21 PM Dear Poet Destroyer A! Beautiful expression of deep feelings sought in the depth of beautiful eyes. "Build sand castles /Around dreams of reality". That's great. Thanks for your generous comment on my poem, Goblet of Desire.

38 Tango February 29, 2016 at 1:42 AM Wow, what a way with words,I loved it particularly the last verse. Best wishes, Tango.

Lisa Richards August 9, 2014 at 10:16 PM Great write with depth and feeling... Lisa

Ravindra K Kapoor August 7, 2014 at 7:07 AM You are a treasure house of enchanting expressions blended with the feelings coming from your heart. You create images to dwell deep and fascinate us. It goes as another favorite from your treasure of wonderful Poems. This one is yours another Precious Gem my friend. Sorry that I could not see it earlier. Love and best wishes always... PD .....Ravindra K Kapoor

Kj Force July 9, 2014 at 9:49 PM Enjoyed this verse...Like most relationships...Blowing in the wind.. have a great week... kjforce

Paul Callus July 4, 2014 at 2:23 PM Hi Linda, I often look in your eyes and, like the wind, they talk to me...but in secret:) Have a nice weekend. // paul

Mel Merrill June 11, 2014 at 12:26 AM Hey girl. Glad I found this. Don't know if you meant it to be, but what an erotic write...luv it! I'd luv to stay and chat, but I've gotta run and take a cold shower. Hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2014 at 11:00 PM Just here to bid you goodnight. A few more comments to go!!

Len Gasun March 21, 2014 at 7:38 AM Hi my dearest sis! Biggest hugs! Stopping by once again to enjoy & embrace one of the very precious gems of my loveliest & most fave poet . Adoring this stellar writes of urs as always.TYTYSM again. By the way hope u'r doin fine. Was here @ soup since 5.3opm. I'm sending u my loving hugs before logging off & goin 4 dinner. Miss u dearest sis & BFF of mine. Many warm hugs! I'll b back soon. lovem4everLeo

Cherl Dunn January 22, 2014 at 8:19 PM I love your vision of nature in this one especially the wind iminagey this is simply beautiful and full of feeling towards nature itself. cheri i have one about the winds chasing each other around the world as if they were children spirits maybe one day i'll take it out of my archieves and post it. lol cheri

Chris G. Vaillancourt January 20, 2014 at 5:28 AM Very good use of words, clear and makes a profound statement

Cinzia Guerci December 8, 2013 at 12:56 PM Love the wind... Your words here are so natural and in some ways wild and powerfull

Roger Horsch December 2, 2013 at 12:48 PM I would love to read this for you any time....Roger

Cherl Dunn November 16, 2013 at 2:58 PM Beautiful my friend lovely, bravo and thank you for your commits, and yes I'm devoted to this man of mine, he can't read very well but it's ok. he is still my living inspiration although he dosesn't understand why. cheri

Chad Weeks October 31, 2013 at 2:03 AM Beautifully written, my poem was about finding love, loosing it, and moving on. Yours takes out the sadness. Poet Destroyer A October 31, 2013 at 2:52 AM the poem is about manipulation, and grooming my next victim. ...lol well at least that is what I heard.

Wendy Meyer October 26, 2013 at 11:42 AM Wind and rain..the breeze and sandcastle..these elements arouse poignant emotions and deep thinking that when they come together are found only in this piece of yours...all senses are alive in this one...wonderful...keep a refilled ink pen nearby,k..- friend, Wendy

Mustapha Mohammed October 24, 2013 at 5:32 AM Beautiful romantic piece. I love this one also.

Sukmawati Komala October 11, 2013 at 12:36 AM Deary Sista LINDA.. how are you.. just stop by to enjoy your great write,, thank you so much for sharing :) Much luv and lights <3 Sk

Suzanne Delaney October 7, 2013 at 3:05 PM Hi Linda Just returning from a trip....jet lag and the whole bit Loved this poem of yours and so happy we are friends.......big Hugs SuZ

Carl Fraser October 7, 2013 at 12:45 AM I deal alot with the wind and sea in my profession and you have captured everything perfectly here, your fans and friends are blessed to know you and your talent. Blessings Carl.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu October 6, 2013 at 8:15 PM Thanks a lot your so sweet and I appreciate your comment on my first acrostic. Kudos. Love and hugs. Baron Of Ebullion

Duke Beaufort October 4, 2013 at 7:41 AM A personified PD as the wind with all your special qualities! You have such a way with words. This is charm and beauty like you. I am praising you and your talent so much because this poem is pure sweetness (with a little hate). I would say (since I can be vulgar) that I feel like wind just gave me a bj :). I am chuckling too much--sorry. Anyway, you captured yourself and your beautiful attributes to a "T". I am very fond of your words as are so many people. You are beautiful.

Bruce Coates October 1, 2013 at 5:10 PM Reassuring words; so comforting!

Elizabeth Jubenville September 26, 2013 at 8:47 AM The power of wind the power of words, beautiful and inspiring ..... with love....Ellie

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