The Wind

She moves in circles, dancing and swaying across the tree tops
Serenaded by the thunderous symphony of dark storm clouds 
Rain joins and embraces her, gathering momentum to fly toward the sky
She whispers and cries, soon making her way back to the tree tops
She embraces her relentless power and releases anger as destruction
Trees soon surrender falling at her feet, she has made her voice known
She is sleepy now, the sky appears calm and brighter, the trees are still
She disappears and retreats until the next unexpected stormy symphony
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Loved your poem so I read it again. Hugs
Kitchin Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Victor, thank you, hugs.
George Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 10:05 AM
Love this piece. Lovely written Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:49 PM
Tonye, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Love your example poem. Awesome personification.
Kitchin Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 1:47 PM
Andrea, thank you.
May Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 9:47 AM
The wind can roar with fury or be calm, Very nicely penned Tania
Kitchin Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Joseph, thank you.
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:47 PM
A poem beautiful woven in splendid emotions, Tania. I like the song, dance, and music that emanate through your words. A lovely write, indeed!
Kitchin Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 3:49 PM
Vijay, thank you.
Kauffman Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 9:52 AM
What a wonderful poem full of the whimsical delight of the wind. I love your vibrant images of a dancing, swaying, embracing, sleepy wind! Writing in the second person is a challenge but you make it look easy! Have to admit I do love hearing the wind at night. Thank you for this delightful picture of the wind!
Kitchin Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 1:34 PM
Sam, thank you.
Brotherton Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 2:54 PM
A wonderful poem and so well timed. Spring storms can pop up from clear blue skies.
Kitchin Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 3:25 PM
Jerry, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 10:11 AM
I am always happy to read your lovely poems. A great description of the wind that creates havoc. Your imagery is perfect.
Kitchin Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 3:25 PM
Victor, thank you, hugs.
Rodgers Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Dear Tania, I loved how you captured the elemental force of nature with raw intensity. You depict the wind's ever-changing demeanor through vivid imagery, from playful dances to ferocious outbursts. I liked how nature's power and unpredictability echo the cycle of calm and storm in our lives. Tania, your words evoke a sense of awe and respect for the forces beyond our control. A vert evocative reflection on the relentless yet beautiful energy of the wind. - Blessings, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 3:25 PM
Daniel, thank you.
Tor Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 8:15 PM
Tania so clever how you wrote this. Really enjoyed reading and loved your theme... The wind became alive and had a mind of its own to do what she wanted...
Kitchin Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 3:49 AM
Michael, thank you.
M  Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Love it Tania….beautifully written and so happy the wind is a she!! Ha….Debx
Kitchin Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 3:20 PM
Deb, thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:52 PM
The wind with all her emotions! Great, Tania!
Kitchin Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 3:20 PM
Kim, thank you.
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