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The Wind

She moves in circles, dancing and swaying across the tree tops Serenaded by the thunderous symphony of dark storm clouds Rain joins and embraces her, gathering momentum to fly toward the sky She whispers and cries, soon making her way back to the tree tops She embraces her relentless power and releases anger as destruction Trees soon surrender falling at her feet, she has made her voice known She is sleepy now, the sky appears calm and brighter, the trees are still She disappears and retreats until the next unexpected stormy symphony

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Date: 3/25/2024 9:51:00 AM
Loved your poem so I read it again. Hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/25/2024 2:22:00 PM
Victor, thank you, hugs.
Date: 3/24/2024 10:05:00 AM
Love this piece. Lovely written Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/24/2024 6:49:00 PM
Tonye, thank you.
Date: 3/23/2024 11:43:00 AM
Love your example poem. Awesome personification.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/23/2024 1:47:00 PM
Andrea, thank you.
Date: 3/23/2024 9:47:00 AM
The wind can roar with fury or be calm, Very nicely penned Tania
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/23/2024 11:22:00 AM
Joseph, thank you.
Date: 3/22/2024 12:47:00 PM
A poem beautiful woven in splendid emotions, Tania. I like the song, dance, and music that emanate through your words. A lovely write, indeed!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/22/2024 3:49:00 PM
Vijay, thank you.
Date: 3/21/2024 9:52:00 AM
What a wonderful poem full of the whimsical delight of the wind. I love your vibrant images of a dancing, swaying, embracing, sleepy wind! Writing in the second person is a challenge but you make it look easy! Have to admit I do love hearing the wind at night. Thank you for this delightful picture of the wind!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/21/2024 1:34:00 PM
Sam, thank you.
Date: 3/20/2024 2:54:00 PM
A wonderful poem and so well timed. Spring storms can pop up from clear blue skies.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/20/2024 3:25:00 PM
Jerry, thank you.
Date: 3/20/2024 10:11:00 AM
I am always happy to read your lovely poems. A great description of the wind that creates havoc. Your imagery is perfect.
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Date: 3/20/2024 3:25:00 PM
Victor, thank you, hugs.
Date: 3/20/2024 5:03:00 AM
Dear Tania, I loved how you captured the elemental force of nature with raw intensity. You depict the wind's ever-changing demeanor through vivid imagery, from playful dances to ferocious outbursts. I liked how nature's power and unpredictability echo the cycle of calm and storm in our lives. Tania, your words evoke a sense of awe and respect for the forces beyond our control. A vert evocative reflection on the relentless yet beautiful energy of the wind. - Blessings, Daniel
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/20/2024 3:25:00 PM
Daniel, thank you.
Date: 3/19/2024 8:15:00 PM
Tania so clever how you wrote this. Really enjoyed reading and loved your theme... The wind became alive and had a mind of its own to do what she wanted...
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/20/2024 3:49:00 AM
Michael, thank you.
Date: 3/19/2024 4:38:00 PM
your personification beautifully captures many aspects of the wind. Personifying the wind was creative, brilliant, and captivating. Simply lovely. Have a great evening, Sara
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/19/2024 7:03:00 PM
Sara, thank you.
Date: 3/19/2024 2:22:00 PM
Love it Tania….beautifully written and so happy the wind is a she!! Ha….Debx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/19/2024 3:20:00 PM
Deb, thank you.
Date: 3/19/2024 1:52:00 PM
The wind with all her emotions! Great, Tania!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/19/2024 3:20:00 PM
Kim, thank you.

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