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The Wind

The wind gusted over the forsaken hills The grasp of its strong, imperishable hands causing a trill of noise Echoing and rebounding over the delicate curves of the Earth. The smell of strong grasses and pollens stuck to the winds never ending lungs Sending both dirt and leaves rustling amidst the scene Trees and abundances of green licked at the delicate breeze, As the dance of the sky was mimicked nonchalant by the jubilant bees The worries of winter long gone Due the brightening days of the freshly bathed dawn.

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Date: 4/28/2022 11:54:00 AM
Nicely written pieces. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the great work of art.
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Date: 4/10/2022 7:56:00 PM
Jenna, I enjoyed your poem. Welcome to soup. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 4/7/2022 3:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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Date: 4/6/2022 6:40:00 AM
wonderfull! I like how several senses are used to create a complete experience for the reader. Just wish it could go on for a while longer... thanks
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