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The Wilting Girl

Petals wilting, one by one, Falling where they may Still burning with insanity, And pain that's here to stay Petals falling, one by one, In the hands of strong desire Burning in a heart of passion, Only filled with fire Petals falling, one by one, Floating down with empty bliss It's too late to bring their color back, So say goodbye with one last kiss Petals falling, one by one, With only hate, and pain If only there had been more sun, If only there had been less rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 2/29/2012 5:28:00 PM
a masjestic write so full of longing, for sanity for love, for nurture! Thanks so much for my placement in your contest..I was horrified myself at 5 when it all happened around me. Light & Love
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Date: 2/10/2012 10:13:00 PM
Another subtle masterpiece filled with truth.
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Date: 7/26/2011 11:24:00 PM
Love it going to read some more. Rarely do I find a good poet on the first try. Thanks for the review on Days of Sunless.
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Date: 7/26/2011 9:58:00 PM
Lovely verse, intense emotion...Great write.....Old Jack
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