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The Willow and the River

THE WILLOW AND THE RIVER Along the river the willows approach the stream It's cool invitation calls them to come closer Inching ever nearer as in a dream The subtle seduction slowly taking over 'Til roots dip in to draw life giving sustenance And they bow in honour and grace for this gift imparted The union now is sealed with pastoral covenants Henceforth the two are never to be parted As water seeps beneath the tree's foundation The willow leans even closer to its love And bowing low to take its final libation Kisses the surface to nevermore rise above Then in one climactic plunge does the tree succumb To unite, dissolve and flow evermore as one

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Date: 7/24/2020 12:29:00 PM
The simile to the life of a soul in Love, is truly amazing. The imagery divine. Great write.
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Date: 7/23/2020 11:45:00 PM
beautiful poem penned; enjoyable
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Date: 9/28/2018 8:43:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Geoffrey. Well done.
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Date: 8/30/2018 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. A lovely sonnet. Enjoyed.
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Date: 8/29/2018 1:22:00 AM
truly enchanting courtship sonnet - love it
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Date: 8/28/2018 5:05:00 PM
Such a gentle, graceful sonnet, love the ending couplet, especially "unite, dissolve and flow as one" just paraphrasing, of course-
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Date: 5/25/2017 3:28:00 AM
I really love this poem of yours Geoffrey, The fact that is set as a seduction scene between the two makes it very unique. A 7++ and a fave.... Maria
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