The Willow and the River

THE WILLOW AND THE RIVER

Along the river the willows approach the stream
It's cool invitation calls them to come closer
Inching ever nearer as in a dream
The subtle seduction slowly taking over
'Til roots dip in to draw life giving  sustenance 
And they bow in honour and grace for this gift imparted
The union now is sealed with pastoral covenants 
Henceforth the two are never to be parted
As water seeps beneath the tree's foundation
The willow leans even closer to its love
And bowing low to take its final libation
Kisses the surface to nevermore rise above
Then in one climactic plunge does the tree succumb
To unite, dissolve and flow evermore as one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Shepard Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 12:29 PM
The simile to the life of a soul in Love, is truly amazing. The imagery divine. Great write.
Bangalee Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 11:45 PM
beautiful poem penned; enjoyable
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 8:43 PM
Congrats on your top win, Geoffrey. Well done.
Gentry Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. A lovely sonnet. Enjoyed.
Waters Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 1:22 AM
truly enchanting courtship sonnet - love it
Faulkner Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Such a gentle, graceful sonnet, love the ending couplet, especially "unite, dissolve and flow as one" just paraphrasing, of course-
Williams Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 3:28 AM
I really love this poem of yours Geoffrey, The fact that is set as a seduction scene between the two makes it very unique. A 7++ and a fave.... Maria
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