The Wild One

The Wild One


I watched, as in a dream mist….

….after a day of rain, fog rolling in off the rocks of Lake Superior

Three large deer, nibbling moist leaves from sapling trees, unconcerned with my presence, 
only 20’ away. Two were young bucks, both with fuzz-covered antlers, stopping occasionally 
to rub them on branches, they must be itchy. The other, a splendid doe, larger than the 
bucks, with golden brown skin, blinking her ears at me when I moved closer. This was their 
forest, I was a guest, my people were busy fighting wars, scheming profits, and pillaging the 
earth, while here, in reality, life was unchanged, the only sounds were warblers singing from 
branch to branch, a couple ravens overhead, barking my location to any other forest 
dwellers interested. On the forest floor, orchids bloomed, and an impressionistic collage of 
wildflowers in every direction, the yellows: jewelweed, buttercups, bellwort, aster and 
coneflower, the whites: yarrow, trillium, hemlock, queen anne’s lace and solomon’s seal, the 
reds: bull thistle, Indian paintbrush, spotted coralroot and  prairie blazing star, the purples: 
wild geranium, spotted knapweed, shooting star and dameweed, and the wild one: me
                                                                                                                             
                                                                                                …..the wild one

                                                                                                                             
                                                                                                                      me




08/22/10
11:22am
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:43 PM
wowser a flower lover extradinar!!!I haven't seen some of those flowers in years! So glad you like that Free Verse so did I! sad no one is reading it. Very sad! Light & Love
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August 23, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today James. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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August 22, 2010 at 11:26 PM
A very peaceful image you share here in your beautiful story. Your love of nature is very clear in this write. Thanks for sharing, Jim. Caroline.
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August 22, 2010 at 10:01 AM
If only we lived in a forest where wars, schemes and pillaging did not take place. We'd have much more reason to join the warblers in singing joyfully. Beautiful imagery and I bet you experienced this on your vacation, Jimbo. Send some prayers my way as I struggle, Hon. Sure could use them now. Love, Carolyn
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