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The Wild One

The Wild One I watched, as in a dream mist…. ….after a day of rain, fog rolling in off the rocks of Lake Superior Three large deer, nibbling moist leaves from sapling trees, unconcerned with my presence, only 20’ away. Two were young bucks, both with fuzz-covered antlers, stopping occasionally to rub them on branches, they must be itchy. The other, a splendid doe, larger than the bucks, with golden brown skin, blinking her ears at me when I moved closer. This was their forest, I was a guest, my people were busy fighting wars, scheming profits, and pillaging the earth, while here, in reality, life was unchanged, the only sounds were warblers singing from branch to branch, a couple ravens overhead, barking my location to any other forest dwellers interested. On the forest floor, orchids bloomed, and an impressionistic collage of wildflowers in every direction, the yellows: jewelweed, buttercups, bellwort, aster and coneflower, the whites: yarrow, trillium, hemlock, queen anne’s lace and solomon’s seal, the reds: bull thistle, Indian paintbrush, spotted coralroot and prairie blazing star, the purples: wild geranium, spotted knapweed, shooting star and dameweed, and the wild one: me …..the wild one me 08/22/10 11:22am

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Date: 8/23/2010 5:43:00 PM
wowser a flower lover extradinar!!!I haven't seen some of those flowers in years! So glad you like that Free Verse so did I! sad no one is reading it. Very sad! Light & Love
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Date: 8/23/2010 10:55:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today James. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2010 11:26:00 PM
A very peaceful image you share here in your beautiful story. Your love of nature is very clear in this write. Thanks for sharing, Jim. Caroline.
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:01:00 AM
If only we lived in a forest where wars, schemes and pillaging did not take place. We'd have much more reason to join the warblers in singing joyfully. Beautiful imagery and I bet you experienced this on your vacation, Jimbo. Send some prayers my way as I struggle, Hon. Sure could use them now. Love, Carolyn
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