The White Horse In My Dreams

The horse in my mind, gallops away,
His hooves, beat inside my skull, 
Like the waves, that pound, upon our strong hull
I hold tight, but the vision won’t stay

I see him now, that mighty white stallion
Galloping freely, upon the wet shore
The sound of his hooves, makes me need him the more
An escape from this old pale galleon

And so at last, we row to the beach
I have travelled so far for this dream
Prancing majestically, his eagerness shows
yet still nervous, he stays out of reach
Slowly he paces toward me, snorting a cloud of steam
I know now my journey is over, as he gently nuzzles my nose




I have selected the theme of 'Horses'
Written by        : Nick Bagnall
For contest by  : Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~
Contest Name  : Horses or Snowflakes or Horses and Snowflakes
Awarded          : Tenth Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/5/2010 10:03:00 AM
wow, sounds like death in the form of a magnificent white freedom, Nick. Love this, and congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/30/2010 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your tenth place win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:12:00 PM
lovely imagery, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:47:00 AM
Many congratulation's Nick on your win in Constance's contest >> James
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:34:00 PM
Congrats Nick on your winning poem in Constance's contest with this unique and creative entry luv.. enjoy your grand win as I have enjoyed reading your poetry tonight luv..
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:11:00 PM
Excellent images, Nick. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:16:00 PM
Very fine interpretation of the theme. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Nick
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations Nick on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:26:00 PM
lovely poem for constance's competition Nick ... good luck !! and many thanks for your kind comment on my poem love Jayne
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:17:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this great write that reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:28:00 AM
enjoyed reading your fine poetry!!
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Date: 10/14/2010 5:40:00 PM
HI, Nick~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/12/2010 5:13:00 PM
Nick, I love the image of you trying to get close to this magnificent whte horse -- literally a dream horse -- and then finally getting near enough for the horse to nuzzle you. Wonderful imagery! Surely a winner in Constance's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2010 8:34:00 AM
My goodness. this is just tremendous, NIck. I think it should score very high in the contest too. What a great way to picture the horse of your dreams!! Luv, Andrea ps. Mine is the unicorn (also title of two of my chapbooks!)
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:52:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this wonderful Sonet, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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