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The Whisper of the Leaves

"Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves" As they announced the coming of Fall Summer held on with just a tease Before autumn spread her decorative shawl The song of birds reflected the change As they chirped melancholy tunes The hues of the leaves in colorful exchange Glistened like gems in the afternoon And in the shadow of the fading sun A flock of birds dotted the sky Departing, having had their summer fun As the leaves on the trees whispered a sigh 4-16-2020 Poetic lines from a Poetry Soup Poet Contest Sponsor: Silent One *Line 1 is from the poem "The Last Goodbye" by Vijay Pandit.

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Date: 5/3/2020 8:37:00 PM
The song of birds reflected the change/As they chirped melancholy tunes... Congrats, Joseph!
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Date: 5/3/2020 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest, Joseph, great imagery and flow, you used the same line I did. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/3/2020 6:09:00 AM
I like your take on the contest.. leaves are happy in some seasons, especially when the birds return.. great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 4/26/2020 1:50:00 PM
Really like this one Joseph. What a cognitive, suggestive picture you paint. It is delightful.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/26/2020 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Lonna
Date: 4/22/2020 3:33:00 PM
Superbly articulated my friend...great entry... I did not know you were a poet lol...stay safe and best wishes...^WW^ :o)
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Joseph May
Date: 4/22/2020 3:34:00 PM
Thanks WW, stay safe..
Date: 4/21/2020 12:20:00 PM
Delightful Joseph - fascinated by your fertile imagination in this poem - had to fav this Joseph, good luck in the contest my friend. Blessings, Jennifer
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Joseph May
Date: 4/22/2020 8:32:00 AM
Jennifer, Thank you for your kind words, and for making it a fave
Date: 4/18/2020 10:58:00 PM
You have created a Masterpiece!! This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. The wind carries those colorful leaves in my direction. You have been inspired by such a talented poet. :) Brandy
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Joseph May
Date: 4/22/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Brandy
Date: 4/18/2020 12:21:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, especially autumn's decorative shawl and birds dotting the sky - wonderful entry for the contest!
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Joseph May
Date: 4/18/2020 7:22:00 PM
Thank you Michelle..
Date: 4/16/2020 6:39:00 PM
Wonderful, Joseph!! I tried using another line and I failed miserably. I am going to try to redo it. You made the whole thing look so easy! (thanks for my recent win. Much appreciated)
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Joseph May
Date: 4/16/2020 7:48:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, (you're welcome,) which line did you choose?
Date: 4/16/2020 3:35:00 PM
Lovely, vividly descriptive piece, Joseph! Janice
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Joseph May
Date: 4/16/2020 7:45:00 PM
Thank you Janice..
Date: 4/16/2020 1:33:00 PM
This is really beautiful--I enjoyed the read, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/16/2020 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Vijay

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