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"You are on a journey and all the answers are whispered without words" Quote by _ Constance I was driving on a highway and snow was falling but, it was nothing to worry about however, an hour out the snow was quite heavy and a wind was blowing wildly the highway slippery around a curve the traffic had stopped so, of course I had to stop too ... so I did I was adjusting the radio when I looked in my mirror and saw a huge transport truck coming at a very high speed I thought it was going to slow down and stop, but it did not my car was hit in the rear and I was flying over the cars I looked down and thought ... how is this possible it is as though my car had wings and at the same time I heard a whisper "not time" my life did not flash in my mind as I had heard happens as my car came crashing down on the highway medium and I heard a loud crunching sound then, I was spinning and spinning, spinning when the car stopped the police were there and helped me out I looked at my car and there was nothing left from behind the front seat the car was split in two a policeman said to me, "it was not your time, Miss" as I was walking away the car was hit by oncoming traffic that's when the tears came and I was shaking there is no way I should have survived that accident and I am quite sure there was a spiritual intervention God, was not ready to have me with him in heaven my whole body ached, and I was bruised but I was not dead obviously I still had things to do on earth God had expectations for me that is the message I carry in my soul so, until it is truly my last breath I will treasure the gift of life each new day and honor the gift of words that God bestowed to me that message I heard loud and clear for we never know when God will call our name and take us home ... the snow thick and wet fierce wind roaring like a train . . . cars lay in pieces ______________________ January 13, 2023 Poetry/Free Vere/the whisper- not your time Copyright Protected, ID 01-1517-416-13 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, A Spiritual Wisdom Download sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 01/16/2023 First Place

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Date: 1/19/2023 9:44:00 AM
Constance, your amazing story is told with your poetic grace and we are blessed that you still have more to do including inspiring us with your words. In my poem "The Mission of the Yellow Songbird" I tell the story of an accident I was almost in because a little bird delayed my journey. Sending you blessings and congratulations dear Constance.
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Date: 1/19/2023 11:55:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment and congratulations, I will try to fine your poem, Constance
Date: 1/16/2023 6:56:00 PM
Constance, you have provided such a lovely and insightful poem about your whisper with spirituality throughout your writing. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/19/2023 11:56:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 1/14/2023 8:33:00 PM
May you always hear the whispers, treasure their truth, and keep the faith. ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/15/2023 7:33:00 PM
Gershon, thank you so much for the visit, and comment, Constance
Date: 1/14/2023 3:37:00 AM
The great song, someone will die today, die tomorrow. You just don't know, and maybe that's why life is so precious.
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Date: 1/14/2023 6:39:00 AM
Paul, thank you so much for the visit, and comment, yes each day is a gift, Constance
Date: 1/13/2023 1:20:00 PM
Inspiring poem to not take day by day for granted, for many are not ready to go when they go, the highways are full of memorials for ones That didn't make it back home,many other things that takes ones life to soon ,most don't get to plan there death like they can birth now, but we can seek new birth from God then any day is good day to go home,but it's better for others that we stay and spread the love and knowledge God has placed within ,God knows this world needs it, bless you my dear friend
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Date: 1/13/2023 2:40:00 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the visit, and the wonderful comment, I agree with your words, blessings friend, Constance
Date: 1/13/2023 1:04:00 PM
Wow! True story?
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Date: 1/13/2023 2:42:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, yes, it is true and happened to me, Constance

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