The Whirligig of Autumn

Orange and reds - the vibrant shmooze of Fall. The social froth of maple shapes, and oak. The chatty leaves infringe upon us all, As piney-green hangs back for Winter folk. A cocktail mixed with children’s play and gaffs. Their brooms and sheets do trick and treat through streets Of cold — the harbinger stirs Jack Frost’s laugh. Mean parents thieve their children’s soulful sweets. Yet, warmth of hearth, the logs aflame with blue, And cinnamon aromatherapy. Good-hearted ‘rents brew up a hearty stew. As kids do leap into the leaves with glee. The whirligig of Autumn wind wins hearts. The reveille of Winter soon will start. 10/26/2019 New Fall Sonnets Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet Note: ’rents - slang for parents
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Cool poem, Kim! Fantastic imagery and uber creative phrases. Your poetic talent lights the page like a glowing Jack-o-Lantern. Love and hugs always.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Thank you my sweet poetry friend! Love and blessings your way...Kim
Krutsinger Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 4:23 PM
" the harbinger stirs Jack Frost’s laugh" Your words are wonderful my friend!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 9:46 PM
Thanks so much!
Adams Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 11:28 AM
you bring the season to life wonderfully and as much as i dislike fall, i can't help but adore this wonderful write... best wishes in the contest :) hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Thanks so much, Sandra!
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 6:12 AM
- A wonderful poem that almost makes me like the fall ... (I said, almost :))) - I wish you the best of luck in the contest ... hope you will win the top prize, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 6:53 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! Blessings :)
Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 11:01 PM
Just a perfect touch with that title, Kim: A whirligig, Autumn is: Leaves whirl, kids whirl, hot chocolate swirls, drum majorettes twirl, and boy meet girl! :) :) Great one. ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:53 AM
Love it! Thank you, my friend! :)
Warrior Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 12:14 PM
Superb entry dear Kimmy...loved it from the start...bol...^WW^ :o)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Thank you, W.W.!
Manassian Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 6:34 AM
The imagery was heart warming, Kim...especially those burning logs and the scent of cinnamon. Delightful write. Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 11:16 AM
Thanks, Eileen!
One Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Wonderful imagery in your sonnet Kim... it flows and rhymes very well also..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 6:22 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Ravidas Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 11:31 AM
Lovely sonnet wins hearts) Good luck in the contest, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Thank you, Kurt!
Sands Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Excellent poem Kim. I love this :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 8:38 AM
I enjoyed the sights and sounds of autumn in your splendid poem--so well described, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 2:01 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
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