The Weight of Silence

A tower stands majestic and imposing 
seeming asleep for the night 
its silence weighing heavy, oppressive, 
like a pain that would not go away 
like a darkness that goes beyond 
the absence of light.

In my sinking heart, I doze in twilight state 
between dreaming and waking - 
the privacy of it promises remedy 
for persistent feelings of anguish 
for losing an innate sense of balance 
like a tortured soul courting sorrows 
hiding behind unseen dark clouds 
unwilling to let go and let be.

Shadows whisper in the stillness 
one can hear a mouse blinking in the dark.
But I find no solace in the silence.
Looking up is a death knell from light 
for the stars are dying, the universe a mystery, 
impenetrable, choked up with unbridled passions.
Reason tumbles in a spit of craziness 
even as I let the pregnant silence linger a bit 
in bare tolerance, while the stars’ light disappear 
swallowed and swallowed as they die.

@jjote 110121
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Buhagiar Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 11:15 PM
You are endowed with great poetic gifts. You should write more. Greetings.
Agustin Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:48 PM
Thanks so much for sharing this. God bless you. Thanks also for your uplifting comments.
Costales Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 6:56 AM
Thanks kbayan. I want to read you more too Jjote
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 1:02 PM
this is amazing writing. Absolutely amazing.
Costales Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Thanks for the heads up
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