The Weeping

And so begins the weeping,
The weeping that comes in waves;
Waves that crash in evening tide
To begin the sorrows fade.
And yet in sorrow I sit,
Melancholy under night;
Night whose air reminds me still
That remembrance is the light.
And who shall be the teller,
The meter for this old song?
Sung in whispers meant for none,
Save for those who may belong.
On air and breeze cries carry,
Yet alone they reach the sea.
And I endure their telling 
As the waves crash over me.

C.L.Baker©2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mcconnell Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 9:34 AM
really nice write, well thought through and quite inspiring. have a great day.
Baker Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Gordon, ThX for that :) C.L.
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April 6, 2013 at 9:50 PM
C L, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA
Baker Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Thank you P.D. :)
Fulghum Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Very nicely done C.L. I enjoyed reading your poem the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd time around. Doug
Baker Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Doug, ThX, I'm so glad that you liked it! C.L.
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March 28, 2013 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations on your win Cl xx
Baker Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 4:20 PM
Mandy, ThX so much :) C.L.
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March 27, 2013 at 5:43 PM
CL, The New Poets of 2013, Congratulations in this contest. Hope to read more of your poems. Take Care*SKAT
Baker Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 5:47 PM
SKAT.... thanks so much. The encouragement is much appreciated.. C.L.
Baker Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 5:45 PM
Rick, Thank you my friend! Your encouragement is a warm summer breeze, surrounding and comforting my soul. C.L.
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March 24, 2013 at 8:31 PM
C L, CONGRATULATIONS with the first poem you posted on the soup :-) it was an honor in hosting this contest for the New Poets of 2013. Thank you for the support. Please enjoy your winning poem. By the way, I posted a blog in honor of the poets who made the list of this contest. The blogs name ----> ""I got the answer :-) What is a poet?"" please check out the blog when you have time. It's a nice gesture from me to you ~ xox ~ LINDA
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