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The Wayward Wind

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April winds.
Cold but dry.
Rambling around 
Buildings, tall and short.
They seem to have a voice:
       Come back to me.
       Come back to me.

I hate such wayward winds
They insist 
       I miss you so.
       I miss you so.
My heart is like a stone.
She left.
Her fault
Blow wind blow
In its lamenting tunes.

But then it slowed.
It was a wind no more.
A soft breeze had blown 
The clouds away.

A knock on the door.
There she stood,
Eyes sparkling
Lips quivering.
       I came to prepare breakfast
      Just for you and me.
The kiss was long and lingering.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2022 1:29:00 PM

Ahh!! I guess this is a good thing. It was a compelling work anyway. I liked the layout and happy ending. I see this was one that I had missed. Sara

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/27/2021 11:39:00 AM

Hello Victor. This entry is so filled with emotion and all poetic elements. I very much enjoyed the voice and tone and the feel because it is expressive. It was an honor to see your work today. May this day find you well.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/23/2021 4:28:00 AM

How beautiful Victor, shows we should listen to the voice of the wayward wind, the poem is wonderful and the ending superb... Belle

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2021 4:02:00 PM

This gave me chills Victor. I adored your ending! Blessings xxoo

Supraja Kannan

Date: 4/18/2021 8:30:00 PM

Great romantic verses... I just enjoyed reading it...

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2021 7:24:00 PM

Enjoyed the romantic and happy ending verse, Victor. Hugs Eve

Mike Bayles

Date: 4/18/2021 5:17:00 PM

This poem is so nice, Victor.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/18/2021 5:13:00 PM

Hi Victor, You held my attention from start to finish. It had a good rhythm and flow. I found it alluring and romantic as well. Who doesn’t like a happy ending? fExcellent job. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/18/2021 4:57:00 PM

I love a happy ending, and this romantic tale of love returned on a soft April breeze captivated me to the end. Well wrought and beautiful. :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/18/2021 3:16:00 PM

I agree with Andrea, it did seem rather dreamlike ... and the lines written in bold came across as whispers for some reason. The outside elements corresponded nicely with the emotions. Well penned.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/18/2021 12:47:00 PM

Hello Victor, i felt the spark in this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/18/2021 11:47:00 AM

It's a heartwarming and sweet story full of tenderness, precious moments, accompanied by beautiful and arousing feelings, is very well-versed idealistic, God bless you, Freind.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2021 10:52:00 AM

Oh so sweet! Love the picture too! God bless you, sweet friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2021 10:09:00 AM

wow, like a dream at the end. So thoughtful and lovely this is.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/18/2021 9:25:00 AM

This is beautiful, tender, filled with emotion and so romantic. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/18/2021 5:44:00 AM

The wayward winds were singing song of love and she heard the call. Beautiful, romantic write, Victor.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/18/2021 4:32:00 AM

Beautiful... a lovely story filled with charm. very creative. idealistic, dreamy, flowing with love and joy. Inspiration at it's finest. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina