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April winds. Cold but dry. Rambling around Buildings, tall and short. They seem to have a voice: Come back to me. Come back to me. I hate such wayward winds They insist I miss you so. I miss you so. My heart is like a stone. She left. Her fault Blow wind blow In its lamenting tunes. But then it slowed. It was a wind no more. A soft breeze had blown The clouds away. A knock on the door. There she stood, Eyes sparkling Lips quivering. I came to prepare breakfast Just for you and me. The kiss was long and lingering.

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Date: 8/8/2022 1:29:00 PM
Ahh!! I guess this is a good thing. It was a compelling work anyway. I liked the layout and happy ending. I see this was one that I had missed. Sara
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Date: 4/27/2021 11:39:00 AM
Hello Victor. This entry is so filled with emotion and all poetic elements. I very much enjoyed the voice and tone and the feel because it is expressive. It was an honor to see your work today. May this day find you well.
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Date: 4/23/2021 4:28:00 AM
How beautiful Victor, shows we should listen to the voice of the wayward wind, the poem is wonderful and the ending superb... Belle
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Date: 4/19/2021 4:02:00 PM
This gave me chills Victor. I adored your ending! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/18/2021 8:30:00 PM
Great romantic verses... I just enjoyed reading it...
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Date: 4/18/2021 7:24:00 PM
Enjoyed the romantic and happy ending verse, Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/18/2021 5:17:00 PM
This poem is so nice, Victor.
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Date: 4/18/2021 5:13:00 PM
Hi Victor, You held my attention from start to finish. It had a good rhythm and flow. I found it alluring and romantic as well. Who doesn’t like a happy ending? fExcellent job. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/18/2021 4:57:00 PM
I love a happy ending, and this romantic tale of love returned on a soft April breeze captivated me to the end. Well wrought and beautiful. :)
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Date: 4/18/2021 3:16:00 PM
I agree with Andrea, it did seem rather dreamlike ... and the lines written in bold came across as whispers for some reason. The outside elements corresponded nicely with the emotions. Well penned.
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Date: 4/18/2021 12:47:00 PM
Hello Victor, i felt the spark in this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 4/18/2021 11:47:00 AM
It's a heartwarming and sweet story full of tenderness, precious moments, accompanied by beautiful and arousing feelings, is very well-versed idealistic, God bless you, Freind.
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Date: 4/18/2021 10:52:00 AM
Oh so sweet! Love the picture too! God bless you, sweet friend!
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Date: 4/18/2021 10:09:00 AM
wow, like a dream at the end. So thoughtful and lovely this is.
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Date: 4/18/2021 9:25:00 AM
This is beautiful, tender, filled with emotion and so romantic. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/18/2021 5:44:00 AM
The wayward winds were singing song of love and she heard the call. Beautiful, romantic write, Victor.
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Date: 4/18/2021 4:32:00 AM
Beautiful... a lovely story filled with charm. very creative. idealistic, dreamy, flowing with love and joy. Inspiration at it's finest. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/18/2021 2:15:00 AM
A very happy and romantic ending Victor, breakfast can wait Tom
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Date: 4/18/2021 2:05:00 AM
A big wow!
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