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The Way You Look At Me

the taste of your lips ah, the flavor of ecstasy your eyes sparkle! FIRST PLACE WINNER Written April 30, 20210 "The Way You Look at Me" Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/4/2021 4:34:00 PM

Ah a good one... Congrats

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 9:55:00 AM

Thanks!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/4/2021 4:31:00 PM

Beautiful...love is!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 9:55:00 AM

Yep, you can say that again. Thanks for your read and comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2021 8:03:00 AM

Delicate and no surprise it was a first place win

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 9:54:00 AM

Caren, thank you for your read and comment.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/4/2021 7:37:00 AM

lovely, Milton ~

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 9:54:00 AM

Thanks, Line, thanks so much for your thought.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2021 3:14:00 AM

Hi L. Milton, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Terry Flood

Date: 5/4/2021 1:28:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Milt. But tell me... was it strawberry lip balm or Marmite? ;-) Terry

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 9:54:00 AM

Definitely strawberry lip balm, Terry. Definitely! Thanks you much.

Carol Mitra

Date: 5/3/2021 11:55:00 PM

Nicely done Milton....Congrats on your win :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Carol. It was a fun write.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/3/2021 11:28:00 PM

Congratulations!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 9:53:00 AM

Thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/1/2021 5:04:00 AM

WoW! L. Milton, You captured much passion in a few words! Well done. You should do well in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 9:53:00 AM

Thanks, Alexis.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2021 4:31:00 PM

love in bloom. Lovely!!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/30/2021 6:27:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I'm not a fan of this format, but I gave it a go! Thanks for your kind thoughts.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/30/2021 2:41:00 PM

Wonderful Monuku, amazing how 17 syllables carry this whole action, but yeah, you are a talented poet. Good luck in the contest, best regards