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The Way It Began

containerised in this vessel alive and yet incomplete pulsations of joy heart felt to fear acknowledged defeat joy elated, fear deflated heart and head stood apart love fused both together light saw darkness depart free from the thinking disease pristine soul stirred in form bliss mists drenched the heart we were taken by the storm

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Date: 8/13/2023 2:54:00 AM
Hello, Seeker - loads of imagery - I like joy elated, fear deflated heart - Good Luck & stay Safe too! Thank You for your Post
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Date: 8/13/2023 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, Perry

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