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The Way He Looked At Me

THE WAY HE LOOKED AT ME The way he looked at me? No particular expression Strange dude Strange only because of surroundings We’d spoken before A few words Can’t recall what about But now just now The way he looked at me? At me but right through me One of those nebulous stares Could have meant anything That look? Almost collegiate Certainly with a collegiate air Well how dare he! I do recall how he walked about Rarely a smile He seemed to fit into the throng as though somehow towering Somehow aloof At a time like this one examines self – all the social graces – Coming up with glaring negative respectabilities How ridiculous these momentary speculations Yet? The way he looked at me? I would rather have had words

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/9/2013 3:47:00 PM
Quite intruiging write here Daver; interesting words and thoughts..'
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading. They say actions speak louder than words yet i believe there are many words to be said about the smallest of actions. Keep up the great work :) Take care
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:51:00 PM
I completely concur!!What's up with that lad, Daver! You deserved some sort of acknowledgement! Next time I tell you.....Gwendolen
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:22:00 AM
Yeah sometimes the words would help so much more than the looks ever could. I enjoyed this one Daver.. Hope you are having a great week :) love Wilma
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Date: 1/10/2012 11:41:00 PM
Daver... lol.. i wish i was there to look at him look at you...i wonder what brought on this poem..lol... ... a very wonderful poem.. Thank you for sharing your awesome poem. Take care and have yourself a good night ;-) always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/8/2012 1:37:00 PM
I sense this soul's felling of assume may be out-dated, since you noted you've met him before. Very classy write Dave ! Have a wonderful week dear poet....much love, james
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:41:00 AM
sometimes a condescdending look speaks volumes over words. You really described this well, Daver. I am having computer problems and I am so glad you had a new poem easy for me to see. I hope I get MY computer back soon!! thanks for being YOU. Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:22:00 AM
Oh well, shame on him, Daver! To say something might have been too revealing, about his self? You can dismiss a look, but words aren't so easy to dispose of.:( Might have been speechless, wishing he were more like you:) Best wishes, love, Mikki
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Date: 1/8/2012 1:09:00 AM
oh so true! i know exactly how you feel, been in one of this situation and it's frustating. darn the man who can speak with his eyes. loved this Daver!
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Date: 1/7/2012 11:09:00 PM
Excelllent Dave-r..Love the last line. Hope all is well with you...BG
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Date: 1/7/2012 5:32:00 PM
excellent again in my book. Really cool how you were able to describe this hard to describe "feeling" as it were and your own in response. I love this one for a bunch of reasons. Masterfully done Daver! goin in my favs for further reminiscing..... thanks -Bob
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Date: 1/7/2012 4:40:00 PM
Well yeah Daver (how do you take a strange look..? anyway its given out a thoughtful expressive write from you here..)
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Date: 1/7/2012 1:30:00 PM
Nice poem. Very good descriptions. Enjoyed
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Date: 1/7/2012 1:01:00 PM
That look; yes, I've seen it. You capture it and my response perfectly.
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