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The Waters Edge

Stand at the waters edge 
it's you I long to see, 
over an ocean blue. 
Walk the sand to find peace, 
as I wait to see you. 



Stand at the waters edge 
watching the morning sun, 
you have been in motion. 
I miss our fun all day, 
in the cool wet ocean. 



Stand at the waters edge 
remembering you left, 
watching the birds go by. 
Oh my heart was left here, 
I just wanted to die. 



Stand at the waters edge 
come home very quickly, 
I will pray on one knee. 
Our time is standing still, 
you still belong to me. 

  

Date Written:4/6/2022 

3 Place 

#4. ocean/sea ~~ HowManySyllables 
Form M - Monchielle - New Poetry Contest 
Monchielle Stanza poetry form only. 
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France Date: 4/17/2022 4:02:00 PM Paula, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest ~ Constance Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/18/2022 7:36:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your Monchielle Contest. Glad you like my write. This one made me work/think harder. I did enjoy writing it for your contest. Have a Great/Blessed Day...................

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 4/17/2022 5:10:00 AM Hello Paula, now I have become familiar with this form it definitely is on my favourite list. Well done...Delice Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/17/2022 8:44:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. So glad you like this Monchielle Stanza type to write. Looks like we both found a new one. Have a Great/Blessed Easter..............

Len Gasun Date: 4/16/2022 10:58:00 PM Wow! I love this so much. Beautiful and romantic poem in a very nice form, monchielle. Congratulations on your win my dear friend with this superb write! Thanks a lot for sharing! A Blessed Easter to you and your family/loved ones. Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/17/2022 8:42:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. I see a WOW??? "Thanks." You made my day. So glad you love this write. Have a Great/Blessed Easter..............

Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/16/2022 10:21:00 AM Back with congratulations, Paula~ Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/16/2022 2:34:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Good to see you back for a visit. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Joseph May Date: 4/15/2022 6:51:00 PM Wondweful write Paula, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/16/2022 2:33:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/15/2022 2:08:00 PM Congrats on your winning romantic work. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/16/2022 2:32:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my Waters Edge write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 4/15/2022 12:11:00 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful and heartfelt write. :)Paulette Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/16/2022 2:31:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Christuraj Alex Date: 4/14/2022 11:05:00 PM "Stand at the waters edge" - Beautiful refrain. "you still belong to me" - Beautiful Monchielle Stanza. Congratulations! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/15/2022 8:06:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you thought this write is beautiful. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Sotto Poet Date: 4/14/2022 12:02:00 PM Congratulations on a very well-deserved win dear, Paula. Blessings Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/15/2022 8:01:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Mike Gentile Date: 4/8/2022 6:55:00 AM Contemplation of life and love at the water's edge is expressed so beautifully Paula in your lines! Wonderful imagery took me there to share the feeling. A lovely write xxoo Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/9/2022 4:59:00 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my waters edge write. Have a great/blessed day..............

Silent One Date: 4/7/2022 12:24:00 PM I've never come across rainstorm burbit seems quite profound from your poem.. inlobe how it flows and the imagery you have created.. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/9/2022 4:58:00 PM Thanks for your note. It was good to hear from you. Glad you like my write. Have a great/blessed day..............

JCB Brul Date: 4/7/2022 9:21:00 AM Oh, your stand on the water edge oustands! Lovely poem...All the best in the contest, Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/7/2022 11:49:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad you like this waters edge write. Have a great/blessed day..............

Bill Baker Date: 4/6/2022 4:00:00 PM I like this form and your poem, Paula. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/7/2022 11:18:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like write. Have a great/blessed day..............

Janice Canerdy Date: 4/6/2022 2:22:00 PM Very descriptive and moving, Paula. Janice Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/7/2022 11:17:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this moving love write. It is hard to miss someone. Have a great/blessed day..............

Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/6/2022 1:56:00 PM A very sweet and touching Monchielle, Paula, I too enjoy the ocean, best wishes for the contest~ Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/7/2022 11:16:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this sweet/ touching love write. I love the ocean and really miss it. Have a great/blessed day..............