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Misty Mountain | Scottish highlands, Natural landmarks, Landmarks

Watcher ... he wandered the mists the high fells of Scottish countryside wrapped in robes of their own wan light aglow like the full of the moon and aback a white Arabian stallion. He commanded the brume and twilight shivers and could cleave sunlight with his sword turning noon to midnight in a swipe filling the fells with dreamy fog that, tales say, was the essence of enchantment transforming the deepest darkness to a glistening, pearly wonderland where starlight suffused everything and everyone and the grandest of dreams were realized by breathing that glimmering haze waves of joyous euphoria saturating your being filling your soul with confidence and care and drowning the spirit with happiness and love until nothing mattered but that light ... not even the realization that your life was over and your soul was now happily ... horridly ... His. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Completely New 22, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/12/2021 8:08:00 PM
I so fully agree with the comments made- this is yet again a masterpiece of wordsmithing and imagination! Definitely a very fine fav. God bless..
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Date: 8/16/2020 8:11:00 AM
This is another display of your amazing talent dear poet. Just write a book already wont ya!
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Date: 8/15/2020 11:01:00 PM
What a wonderful poet you are, Greg. Another example of your mastery. Congrats on your #1 with Brian, no easy feat these days!
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Date: 8/15/2020 9:19:00 PM
Big Congrats to win Top on this wonderful poem.
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