The Watch Maker

The Watch Maker…


Let me be, leave me alone, I'm Him, I'm alone.
I'm in pain; let me be, let me be, on my own.
 All the time, every night, I see their vanished sights.
Let me be, being alone, tired of silent nights.
In this world of darkness, I feel pain and sadness.
Nothing there in my heart only beats emptiness.
In this sad cave of time, I suffered from my crime.
I suffered with this pain; pain is there all the time.
Time is pain; I feel trapped, I cannot face the fact.
Who am I? Watchmaker, I don't know how to act.
Fault me not if I did what I did on my own,
I am here, lonely nights, sleepless, all alone.
What I did in my mind I made it partly blind.
I made it for my sake, what I hoped yet to find.
I have dreamt of the sun; shining sun seemed like fun. 
No more fear, no more fright, a good deed I have done.
With the light, I can see a luscious land full of trees,
shining jewels, red and green, dancing with morning breeze.
I made birds fly too high, no more pain, no more cry.
Rainbow near, out of clouds, oceans there in the sky.
I made grapes; I made wine; holy wine suits me fine.
I made drunks; I am drunk; drunks, to me, are divine.
I gave love; I gave truth to all men's sins of youth.
I gave life, I gave death, I gave all reckless truth.
I shall sleep all night long to have dreams of the light.
If I wake up tonight, all your days will be night.
I need you more than I; if you live, I don't die,
Who is it? You or I; if we're one, both can fly.	
Am I drunk, maybe mad? Let me be, I'll be glad.
Don't wake me. I'll be mad, knowing that you feel bad.
12/7/17 Haloo

The painting is called The Watch Maker, it is acrylic on canvas...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Raven Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Hi pashang, this is a most creative Masavni from your pen. Your imagination does sing freely through each thought. Your words bring the reader into the heart of your imagery and I, for one, was entranced by the piece from beginning to end. This incredible write is a fave my friend. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
Salehi Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 2:50 AM
Thanks Mike, I do not know how to respond to your kind words. I just say thank you.
Martin Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Incredible masnavi! You have captured the true form much better than I.
Salehi Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:26 PM
Thanks dear..
Bateman Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Hello Pashang, A very creative poem with a finely tuned intensity of thought and interwoven imagery. You bring the reader fully along with you in this masterfully-done narrative. The word picture you've crafted here of the Watch Maker and his numerous actions is a most definite pleasure to read!! Superb!! Best Wishes, Gary
Salehi Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 10:33 AM
Thanks Gary, thanks again and again. The master of this style of poetry is RUMI. The question is, am I mad or am I drunk? Who is going to take me home?....
Horsman Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 5:12 AM
What an amazing poem this is, you take the very soul in to the picture with your wonderful words...
Salehi Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Thanks Harry....Have you seen in the picture the watch is broken?
Martin Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Excellent Masnavi! I have just begun writing Masnavi's as well - will have to post one.
Salehi Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Great my dear, let me know.... Thank you..
Tripp Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Pashang, this is awesome. I had never read, nor written this form and it appears to be difficult yet you have captured it with a capable pen. Very cool!
Salehi Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Thanks Rhonda, you're very kind.
Buck Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Pashang: You've read a bit of my stuff and know how simple it is. I just can't get my mind around the intensity you have included in this lovely piece. Thank you for sharing it with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. And an artist as well, great job. oldbuck
Salehi Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Thank you my friend....I like your style a lot...
Bocsa Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 1:43 PM
I should like to learn to write poetry from you.
Salehi Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:04 PM
You are so kind.... Thank you
Wanter Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Your imagination from dark to light and back again blew me away. Real writing.
Salehi Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Thank you my dear... you are so kind...
Lee Sr. Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Beautiful write! my friend the Almighty watch maker God...He's creator of awe and all.. Thanks for sharing your creativity..Wonderful write and painting... A Fav for me James
Salehi Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:58 AM
Thank you very much James, I admire your works as well ...
Teagan Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 10:06 PM
A very intriguing write, to go along with the painting. Nice job
Salehi Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Thanks Becca..
Callus Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 11:00 AM
What a creative muse you possess, Pashang! I love how you interpreted this painting. Well done! Regards // paul
Salehi Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Thanks Paul....I want to know the mind of God!
Pandit Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 7:09 AM
A purposeful creation..deep in thought..rhythmic, reflective...very well written, Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 1:24 PM
You are so kind Vijay...
Williams Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 12:48 AM
An emotional write my dear Haloo, the painting is a beautiful work of art ...Maria
Salehi Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Thanks Maria.... Haloo
Roper Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Nicely done, Pashang, with the light guiding ... Nice painting. Hugs eve
Salehi Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Thanks Eve.... You are so kind
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 3:32 PM
This reminds me of a movie I saw last year, it was a metaphor for God, but now I have gone and forgotten its title. Anyway, this is very dream-like and I believe the watch maker is God?
Salehi Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Indeed.... I love smart people...
Murray Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 5:41 PM
And being a midwife I see the little baby. Pass me some of that holy wine Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Cheers...
Sergi Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Thisdream epitomizes all dreams beautiful work!
Salehi Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Thanks Ralph... Am I drunk?......Always dreaming...
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 2:42 PM
such deep dark imagery which is complimented so well by your artistic talents (so glad to see that butterfly!!!) I'd hate to have such dark dreams and would welcome being woken from it. What book is it in your picture and i have to say the detail on the chess piece is stunning!!! :-) hugs Jan xx
Salehi Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Thanks Jan, the book says to BE or to BECOME... Poor God that had to dream of us....
One Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 1:42 PM
An excellent poem my friend and a lovely painting.. I hope you are well...
Salehi Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Thank you Mr. Silent one "Khamoush" for stopping by....
Smith Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 1:27 AM
Wow. I really like the way you managed to keep up the pace on this one. Took me right along for the ride. Been a while since I stopped by. Good to too see you are still posting with your talent. Fondest regards David in NZ
Salehi Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Thanks David... welcome back...
Andresen Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 2:07 PM
- A dream with lots of feelings, Pashang - Some questions can be answered others can not - A great poem - Never too late to wish you; A happy new year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, Happy new year to you as well.... Love
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