The Warm Friend

He would visit the wharf of the pond very often
Peace and joy writ large on his lips and eyes
He would whistle a tune to call the shoal of fish 
From inside the water as well as from his heart
The clouds got intimate with the flirting sunlight

Like a comfortable poem the shoals appeared
In three or four groups they would come up to
He would look like gleefully chatting with them
In wonder would look on the tales in the reeds
Shadows of tall palms played hide and seek

He would feed them as if they were his children
Sometimes he just talked on with no motivation 
Their movement would raise ripples in the pond
Inside would pulsate an impressionist painting
The euphoria in water would erase and redraw

Clouds in loud colours would go down the water
And would watch in wonder the blue rendezvous
He shed the foliage of his unquenched passion
Into the mother water that with a purple comfort
Would convert them in the lotus of his heartbeat

Country folks remarked he must have been a fish
In his previous birth in a very deep pool or lake
No, others would say, an angel accompanied him
In his surreal bridge of love for the water and soil
The mahogany at the roadside would smile a little

He would write so well his poem inside the water 
Where human and piscine tongues would meet
Time halted a while in the warm breasts of geese
As the sessions came to an end he would depart
Sweet and salty sweat-drops would wet his shirt
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14 March 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/15/2017 10:30:00 AM
The euphoria in water would erase and redraw....Wow Sir! Its beautiful. I'm a college student who writes poems as a hobby. Hats off to you sir. People like you make me realise the miles I have to go. You are true inspiration Sir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/16/2017 7:20:00 AM
Thank you for your delight at my words of pleasure ... Here in the poetry soup there are far superior poets ... Read, assimilate and write with your own flowers ... as you love poem, you will definitely prosper, Parvathy ...
Date: 3/14/2017 2:40:00 PM
Beautiful description of the shores of the sea! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/14/2017 11:53:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/14/2017 7:28:00 AM
Shadows of tall palms wonderfully and interestingly played hide and seek.Surreal bridge of love for the water and soil mesmerized mind with this magnificent expression. An interesting imagery is drawn in this poem here. ...7
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Date: 3/14/2017 11:54:00 PM
Thank you very much ..
Date: 3/14/2017 6:56:00 AM
Inside would pulsate an impressionist painting. The euphoria in water would erase and redraw. Love especially those two lines! And the final stanza! Lovely, Probir!
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Date: 3/14/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/14/2017 6:33:00 AM
If each time you disappear you come up with such a masterpiece then I shouldn't complain when you are away dear, Probir! A seven my friend!
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Date: 3/14/2017 7:18:00 AM
Time and health stand in the way ... Many a dark cloud from the Bay of Bengal! ... Thank you for your nice comments ...
Date: 3/14/2017 6:25:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Probir! I particularly love that line 'Time halted a while in the warm breasts of geese'. Beautiful.
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Date: 3/14/2017 7:19:00 AM
Thank you ...
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