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The War With In Pts

She was his devoted and loving wife and then came those pitiful, anguished nights.. She counted the cries, the bruising and prayed for an end to his confusion. His night frights that she was observing had become quite unnerving.. In their bed he lay restless, squirming, what he saw was deeply disturbing.. Pillows punched and flattened held the key to the terrors that she couldn't see. Most days he was distant, robotic. Was he now becoming psychotic? She held him with a heart so tender. The war had ended but those memories wouldn't surrender. It's trauma lived on and it bore thru his flesh. He now fought the battle of post traumatic stress.

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Date: 3/23/2023 5:01:00 PM
PTSD is as agonizing as any physical malady, and you describe the agony adeptly. Many will be able to commiserate with your struggles. Well Done! Robert
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 3/25/2023 7:01:00 PM
Hi Robert, I find it odd that it's only been in very recent years that ptsd is being addressed. My personal experience was dealing with a person's mental health condition that was out of control. Any way it was therapeutic. Thanks for commenting. Nancy
Date: 3/17/2023 6:21:00 AM
It is sad that govts start wars but people fight them. I say let the politicians go fight their own wars. A very sad poem, Nancy.
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 3/18/2023 6:55:00 AM
Hi Daniel, What you said rings of truth. I think that this poem is still evolving and not really complete yet. I pulled up your site recently and really enjoy reading your witty poems. Take care, Nancy

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