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"The Walk" The most precious diamonds falling every step before me wet the ground bare feet my blood, my gift, our foundations placed reverently before you solidarity I gave you gifted under burning oath of Golden Sun Where have you gone In this dream of yours? Where are all my children? Bring me my children the ones who meet me unknown or known singing loud and clear to me, a ghost in their dreams I am that light that stills the storms the truth of life in its all, its broken seams Victory in Love means more than darkness to these ones in their dreams My precious pearls from their hearts seeded and blooming through my heart they are the ones who deliver true wisdom bring me the children a new life evolving too much talk now, stand beside me Come child of mine Be afraid no more Walk with me In the time of something beautiful and astounding Walk with me you, the one who dares, you know who you are, The True Believer (LadyLabyrinth / 2021) gvlm-llb "A Black Sun" / Gary Numan https://youtu.be/lIdlve4SsIg "When I was a child, my life seemed endless, too far to see When I was a child, the world was waiting and called to me And everyone I loved would live for eternity And everything I dreamed would all come true for me But now I feel the end come My childish dreams are undone I cry under a black sun And every song is unsung You will hear me when the wind sighs You will feel me beside you always You won't see me, but I'll be with you When I was a child, all love was painless, no tears to cry When I was a child, I played the hero who held the sky But now I hold you and love is more than I can bear And when I think of you, love becomes a pain to share But I hear loss calling and this is pain talking And I am fear walking and these are tears falling You will hear me when the wind sighs You will feel me beside you always You won't see me, but I'll be with you" (Gary Numan) The Miorror of Lost Sees: Theophany https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_mirror_of_lost_sees_theophany_1263410 Sacrifice https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/sacrifice_1242920 John 8:12 LUX VITAE

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Date: 8/14/2021 8:51:00 AM
Hi Lady Labyrinth - I have never commented on your poems but have read many and applaud your talent. Congratulations on POTD, although they come a little belated. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/14/2021 5:53:00 PM
Very kind Jennifer. I think you may have on a few earlier ones. Thank you.
Date: 8/11/2021 1:07:00 PM
They walk and breathe within your heart and your soul
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/11/2021 4:16:00 PM
Love letters to the souls. x
Date: 8/5/2021 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations Lady Labyrinth, well deserved win with a great poem, and a great English mastery.
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Date: 8/5/2021 3:40:00 PM
Thank you. Your mastering of English is far superior to mine. I noticed your translation of the French poet...I have read most of your poems this morning. Of very high standard for this joint. x
Date: 8/4/2021 12:50:00 PM
Wonderful writing. God bless you. Love, Gina CONGRATS on POTD
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Date: 8/4/2021 4:27:00 PM
Thanks Gina. x
Date: 8/4/2021 4:56:00 AM
Awesome work of praise,. Love and faith in Lord. Loved the design use of simple monorhyme effectively. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour
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Date: 8/4/2021 4:27:00 PM
Thanks again Rama. x
Date: 8/4/2021 1:04:00 AM
Brilliant writing, Lady Labyrinth, congratulations on POTD:)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/4/2021 4:09:00 AM
Thanks Jo. x
Date: 8/3/2021 7:35:00 PM
Lady, Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved~ Warren
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Date: 8/3/2021 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Monsieur Doll. I left a comment or two for you... x
Date: 8/3/2021 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour
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Date: 8/3/2021 5:45:00 PM
Thank you Rama. I left a comment on a beautiful poem you wrote. x
Date: 8/3/2021 8:50:00 AM
Lady, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ love and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 8/3/2021 5:47:00 PM
Isolation gives a person time to further walk the labyrinthine caves to find treasures within...that seem to bloom from walls at will. x
Date: 8/3/2021 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a creative story/write. "Happy Birthday" Have a blessed day/year Writing away..............
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Date: 8/3/2021 5:48:00 PM
Lady Goldsmith, as much as I try to put down the tapping of fingers, they keep dancing across the keyboard, this could be indicative of my maturing swiss cheese mind. Thank you. x
Date: 8/3/2021 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations for this great POTD :)
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Date: 8/3/2021 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I took the time to read a few of yours. I loved one in particular and left a comment. x
Date: 8/3/2021 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations on being awarded POTD for this wonderfully created new gem my friend. A well deserved choice and truly was a pleasure to read again.. God bless...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/3/2021 5:58:00 PM
Thy Kingdom Come. Poetry is such a dreadful addiction, isn't it? Each time you write the last, it prompts you to turn away and you find yourself pulled back into the dream of delivering something more beautiful, whether light or dark. One writes for themselves first to survive ... to make sense of something, perhaps of it all - then in the book I am writing (my life) - the ones they love... and perhaps to give a little of what you feel, to others, to let them know they are never alone....there is where the poems of significance grow. Thank you for your friendship through your 'terrible' poetry addiction - and do keep writing Lindley, for as long as you can. xx
Date: 8/2/2021 2:10:00 PM
Now and Forever.
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Date: 8/2/2021 2:11:00 PM
https://youtu.be/Pb9ADQTk7J8
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Date: 8/2/2021 2:10:00 PM
https://genius.com/Gary-numan-now-and-forever-lyrics
Date: 8/2/2021 1:26:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/sacrifice_1242920
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Date: 8/2/2021 1:40:00 PM
https://youtu.be/k9x_maPw0DE
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/2/2021 1:39:00 PM
https://genius.com/Gary-numan-the-end-of-dragons-lyrics
Date: 8/2/2021 12:58:00 PM
"The Mirror of Lost Sees: Theophany".
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Date: 8/2/2021 1:20:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_mirror_of_lost_sees_theophany_1263410
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/2/2021 1:19:00 PM
https://youtu.be/fIa0U4DMTFs
Date: 8/2/2021 5:15:00 AM
A walk of truth and a walk of sweet love Tree of life, its limbs reaching up above And beauty as if golden rays cast down For one lost but so lovely in her gown Love as is sent across the great expanse Praying Fate And Time allows one more chance............ Your poem truly inspires... A gem and a fav... God bless..
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/2/2021 12:20:00 PM
thank you for that birthday verse. So not lost, one might say "found". And if not in the verse I write, in the course of the reader's own life, eventually, when they are ready. We are all walking that walk. Where achievements and titles and failings are stripped bare and we are all on the same playing field answerable to Love - that which we are all looking for inevitably. That is the Truth of it all.
Date: 8/1/2021 1:25:00 PM
Wonderful poetry on a Sunday afternoon my friend. Have a great day.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/1/2021 6:13:00 PM
A little Christ Consciousness goes a long way at present. One for the children and the children in all of us. No one is ever alone. I was watching that Ronald Reagan piece the other night, his 1987 address to the U.N. It goes like this, "Cannot swords be turned to plowshares? Can we and all nations not live in peace? In our obsession with antagonisms of the moment, we often forget how much unites all the members of humanity. Perhaps we need some outside, universal threat to make us recognize this common bond. I occasionally think how quickly our differences worldwide would vanish if we were facing an alien threat from outside this world. And yet, I ask you, is not an alien force already among us? What could be more alien to the universal aspirations of our peoples than war and the threat of war?”
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/1/2021 6:12:00 PM
Perhaps it's more like the Corona Virus bringing us together as Humanity and not some other worldly extraterrestrial threat...Time will tell. We are all going through a huge cleansing process, and as difficult and heartbreaking as it has been and is for a lot of us, it is drawing us closer together with empathy as humans, no matter the colour of our skin, nor our religious dogma. Off on a tangent again, I'm allowed that, it's my birthday today ;). Don't you get cold sitting on that bike with no clothes on....
Date: 8/1/2021 5:17:00 AM
LUX VITAE
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Date: 8/1/2021 5:11:00 AM
"Blue Sky"
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/1/2021 5:13:00 AM
"When I was a child, I played the hero who held the sky..."
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/1/2021 5:11:00 AM
John 8:12