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The Waitress

“All men are pricks” she says “Are you sure about that?” I say I look deep into her eyes and she half smiles. She holds the stare and so do I. “Whatever a woman says, she means the opposite” she says with a giggle and stubs her cigarette. She leaves to do a chore inside the café. I sip my latte and wait for her to come back. I love our little chats!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/18/2010 10:06:00 PM
OOlala. Interesting chats with a hint of flirt,and re the conversation,this waitress is very smart re her thoughts about all men,lol!Sweet poem,C.C
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:51:00 PM
Veru cute story behind this poem, David. You always deliver top notch! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:59:00 PM
David I felt like I was eavesdropping on your conversation with her while reading it.. Love it, WNN
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:30:00 PM
Good one!!!!!!!! AND Good time you must have spend with her!!!!!!! Very well written!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:52:00 PM
cute cute CUTE! LUv, Andrea hmm, a fav!
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Date: 7/18/2010 5:11:00 PM
people that don't tip right...why I oughtta lol cute poem
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Date: 7/18/2010 4:53:00 PM
Luv the chats David and she probably half means what she says speaking from experience... not to be offended.. I am sure she did not mean u my friend.. wonderful write.. with luv..
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